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Array ( [sid] => 57265 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Losing Control [time] => 2004-07-23 02:38:35 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I see you from across the room
You’re looking by my way
Oh how much I hate you
I wish you’d go away

I remember the times you hurt me
You make me want to scream
But in my time of desperate needs
You always were on my team

I can’t recall how we met
Its seems like such a blur
I just had a hard day
And suddenly there you were

You’ve got this thing about you
It’s as if you were a drug
I’ve become so addicted to you
I just can’t pull the plug

But it’s an uphill battle
One I never win
You seem to have control of me
I can see your evil grin

There’s no use in fighting it
I am under your command
I walk to you from across the room
It’s as though you had this planned

Today was different though
I think you had enough
You caught me by the throat
And dared me to call your bluff

I stared directly at you
You didn’t even twitch
You knew it was going to be today
That’s when you flicked the switch

The room began to get so dim
I felt warm throughout
Even though I wanted to
I wasn’t able to shout

Right before all faded black
I gripped you in my hand
How can a knife control some one
And put them where they stand?
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 234 [topic] => 36 [informant] => lilblkcat [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Losing Control

Contributed by lilblkcat on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 02:38:35 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



I see you from across the room
You’re looking by my way
Oh how much I hate you
I wish you’d go away

I remember the times you hurt me
You make me want to scream
But in my time of desperate needs
You always were on my team

I can’t recall how we met
Its seems like such a blur
I just had a hard day
And suddenly there you were

You’ve got this thing about you
It’s as if you were a drug
I’ve become so addicted to you
I just can’t pull the plug

But it’s an uphill battle
One I never win
You seem to have control of me
I can see your evil grin

There’s no use in fighting it
I am under your command
I walk to you from across the room
It’s as though you had this planned

Today was different though
I think you had enough
You caught me by the throat
And dared me to call your bluff

I stared directly at you
You didn’t even twitch
You knew it was going to be today
That’s when you flicked the switch

The room began to get so dim
I felt warm throughout
Even though I wanted to
I wasn’t able to shout

Right before all faded black
I gripped you in my hand
How can a knife control some one
And put them where they stand?




Copyright © lilblkcat ... [ 2004-07-23 02:38:35]
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Re: Losing Control (User Rating: 1 )
by screwup on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 04:18:05 PM AEST
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very, very well written...i understand this completely...and it is like an addiction. you put the words to it very well.




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