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Array ( [sid] => 57264 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Let me go! [time] => 2004-07-23 02:34:35 [hometext] => i wanted out of that horrible relationship [bodytext] => Today you cried while you hit me
as if you actually cared
you've hurt me so bad before
as if my cries weren't heard

So what have we got here
have you opened your eyes?
have you changed? do you care?
you always say you love me
actually every chance you get
but does that mean i have to love you back?

I know you put your heart and soul into this
but can't you see?
it wasn't meant to be!
we cry so often
almost everyday
but you can't see
this wasn't meant to be

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Let me go!

Contributed by everyonehatingonLiz on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 02:34:35 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Today you cried while you hit me
as if you actually cared
you've hurt me so bad before
as if my cries weren't heard

So what have we got here
have you opened your eyes?
have you changed? do you care?
you always say you love me
actually every chance you get
but does that mean i have to love you back?

I know you put your heart and soul into this
but can't you see?
it wasn't meant to be!
we cry so often
almost everyday
but you can't see
this wasn't meant to be

Copyright © everyonehatingonLiz ... [ 2004-07-23 02:34:35]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Let me go! (User Rating: 1 )
by lilblkcat on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 02:46:20 AM AEST
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Im sorry you had to go through that. I can feel your pain.

Re: Let me go! (User Rating: 1 )
by xlooseroftomorrowx on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 05:18:08 AM AEST
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i know things like that are hard to go through. i used to live with an abusive step father. but im glad your getting through that. and the poem was amazing.

Re: Let me go! (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 08:29:31 AM AEST
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Awwww hun *hugs you* I am sorry for the pain you had to endure in this relationship....very emotional write,

pixie xx

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