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Array ( [sid] => 57237 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Between the Lines [time] => 2004-07-22 22:19:14 [hometext] => There isn't much emphasis on the random scribblings. Just the physical shape the words had on the page.(which unfortunately doesnt really show up here) [bodytext] => ask me about
a world you
cannot see
with your
blind eyes
just staring
to the broken
ground crying
about the
unjust way
the life stolen
from you begs
for forgiveness
Call to the
saviour and
hope he will
hear the pain in your voice and let sorrow sway his hand as you fall through the
cracks of memory’s grip. I cannot open your eyes to the answers that you seek. You
must read between the lines if you are to find the truth that you are searching for
I see pain
across the face
you wear
hiding behind
the mask you
can escape
only by your
dying. I catch
a final breath
from cold lips
and taste the
final tear still
bitter in your
eyes and
smile knowing noone
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 25 [informant] => jt [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

Between the Lines

Contributed by jt on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 10:19:14 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

ask me about
a world you
cannot see
with your
blind eyes
just staring
to the broken
ground crying
about the
unjust way
the life stolen
from you begs
for forgiveness
Call to the
saviour and
hope he will
hear the pain in your voice and let sorrow sway his hand as you fall through the
cracks of memory’s grip. I cannot open your eyes to the answers that you seek. You
must read between the lines if you are to find the truth that you are searching for
I see pain
across the face
you wear
hiding behind
the mask you
can escape
only by your
dying. I catch
a final breath
from cold lips
and taste the
final tear still
bitter in your
eyes and
smile knowing noone

Copyright © jt ... [ 2004-07-22 22:19:14]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Between the Lines (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 10:31:41 PM AEST
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excellent write. cant express how much i love this piece. =]

Re: Between the Lines (User Rating: 1 )
by Alina on Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 05:41:31 PM AEST
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WONDERFUL!!!
makes reflect upon myself and describes me somewhat/ sometimes.
Keep the good writings!!!

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