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Array ( [sid] => 57231 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cry For Help [time] => 2004-07-22 21:21:51 [hometext] => [bodytext] => the day is dark
your probably at the park
acting like a fool
using alochol as a tool
hurting everyone around you
silently hurting yourself too
thinking it was the way to go
watching tour life go by slow
i tries to protect you
but you pushed me away
i hate you is what i feard you say
thats the day you left
tearing my geart in half
watching you stand there and laugh
later i got a call
saying you had a terrible fall
soon later you were dead
theres so many things i should of said
now its too late
you decided your fate
now you look down from the sky
watching me cry
you send me a ray of sunlite
to tell me everything will be all rite
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Cry For Help

Contributed by punkprincess6689 on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 09:21:51 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

the day is dark
your probably at the park
acting like a fool
using alochol as a tool
hurting everyone around you
silently hurting yourself too
thinking it was the way to go
watching tour life go by slow
i tries to protect you
but you pushed me away
i hate you is what i feard you say
thats the day you left
tearing my geart in half
watching you stand there and laugh
later i got a call
saying you had a terrible fall
soon later you were dead
theres so many things i should of said
now its too late
you decided your fate
now you look down from the sky
watching me cry
you send me a ray of sunlite
to tell me everything will be all rite

Copyright © punkprincess6689 ... [ 2004-07-22 21:21:51]
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Re: Cry For Help (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 09:34:14 PM AEST
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Hey Kim. I Like This. Read My Poetry Some Time

Re: Cry For Help (User Rating: 1 )
by JT on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 09:54:19 PM AEST
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sad write. its always hard losing someone suddenly. You seem to get stuck on the things you should or shouldnt have said the last time you saw them. keep writing
-jt-

Re: Cry For Help (User Rating: 1 )
by justjonesy on Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 08:44:36 PM AEST
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wow this was a great write....had butterflies when I got near the end...good job

Re: Cry For Help (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 11:45:05 PM AEST
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good write..i can really feel what your saying in this. everything you write is awsome..you never cease to amaze me..

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