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Over the now lifeless lump
A life spent growing
Only to end seemingly wasteful

Crumbling skin
Shows what lies beneath
Blood red liquid seeps out
Drips from the flaky covering that can’t hold it in

Sharp steel glows in the light
A cruel silver trident
Drives downward
Striking in again

Oh the humanity I cry
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Cherry Pie

Contributed by Tarukar on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 08:58:27 PM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry

A single tear drop is shed
Over the now lifeless lump
A life spent growing
Only to end seemingly wasteful

Crumbling skin
Shows what lies beneath
Blood red liquid seeps out
Drips from the flaky covering that can’t hold it in

Sharp steel glows in the light
A cruel silver trident
Drives downward
Striking in again

Oh the humanity I cry
As I take another bite of my cherry pie

Copyright Â© Tarukar ... [ 2004-07-22 20:58:27]
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Re: Cherry Pie (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 09:50:07 PM AEST
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ha! brilliant! warm welcome to ypdc:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Cherry Pie (User Rating: 1 )
by Dusty on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 10:28:43 PM AEST
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That was pretty cute with the little twist at the end.
~Dusty~

Re: Cherry Pie (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 11:52:51 PM AEST
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Thanks loads. Now I have to go to the bakery tomorrow. Cherry pie is my favorite dessert! LOL This is a very cute poem. I love the twist at the end. I would love it better if it was my piece of cherry pie. Welcome to our little family.

Rita

Re: Cherry Pie (User Rating: 1 )
by tifrob on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 02:56:58 AM AEST
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Nessa told me to come and read this poem. She's right, it's cute... Good job. it's 3:00 a.m. and I'm reading about cherry pie. This is as bad as a fast food commercial on my tv...lol

J~

Re: Cherry Pie (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 05:35:55 AM AEST
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Lol I'm not a great fan of cherryies, but at least I had good laugh reading this poem, well done and welcome, to the land of creation,

Take care

Re: Cherry Pie (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 09:25:28 PM AEST
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Ohh Willy I'm so mad that I'm not the first to comment... OR to know about your coming here.

Ah well. I still get to call you Willy (in a german accent of course)

I really like this poem. It's very "O Henry" like. I got a great giggle out of this one.

Lots of love and peace be with you,

Chelsea

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