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Fresh and new
When I first saw you
it was then I knew
You were the one that I was waiting for
You were the one that I was wishing for
When you first looked at me that way
it was my first breath, you took away
And with your first kiss I first stared to live

Time can be cruel
Why did it end?
It was too short
it wasn't the plan.
The night the phone rung it seemed like a dream.
How did it happen? Why did fate take you from me?

My life shattered to into pieces upon the floor.
My heart died along with my dreams.
The day of the funeral I had a plan
Without you there is no reason to go on.
My heart died with you and now my body will too.
I walked in the door and there your body laid
This isn't real, please wake up and come back to me.
You didn't answer my plea. I look around the room.
Our friends and family stand there watching
So much sorrow so much gloom.
They tried to comfort me and the pain will fade with time. They say
They fail to see that without you there is no me.
I make it though the funeral and watch them lower you in the ground.
They cover you and place the flowers all around.
I stand there watching the spot where you lie.
All our friends walk away all the family leaves.
I don't move I just stand there
cold, numb
I lay on top of the fresh turn dirt.
I take the gun and aim for the spot that brings my pain.
In a flash we are together again.
Please forgive me baby I didn't mean to lie.
I just could make it without you by my side.
God give our parents, family and friends.
The strength to go on and handle the lose.
Let them know that we are together again
Let them know I'm smiling again.
Lord dry their tears and bless them with a love that death can't kill.
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Death

Contributed by suzume_b on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 02:20:24 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Loves first touch
Fresh and new
When I first saw you
it was then I knew
You were the one that I was waiting for
You were the one that I was wishing for
When you first looked at me that way
it was my first breath, you took away
And with your first kiss I first stared to live

Time can be cruel
Why did it end?
It was too short
it wasn't the plan.
The night the phone rung it seemed like a dream.
How did it happen? Why did fate take you from me?

My life shattered to into pieces upon the floor.
My heart died along with my dreams.
The day of the funeral I had a plan
Without you there is no reason to go on.
My heart died with you and now my body will too.
I walked in the door and there your body laid
This isn't real, please wake up and come back to me.
You didn't answer my plea. I look around the room.
Our friends and family stand there watching
So much sorrow so much gloom.
They tried to comfort me and the pain will fade with time. They say
They fail to see that without you there is no me.
I make it though the funeral and watch them lower you in the ground.
They cover you and place the flowers all around.
I stand there watching the spot where you lie.
All our friends walk away all the family leaves.
I don't move I just stand there
cold, numb
I lay on top of the fresh turn dirt.
I take the gun and aim for the spot that brings my pain.
In a flash we are together again.
Please forgive me baby I didn't mean to lie.
I just could make it without you by my side.
God give our parents, family and friends.
The strength to go on and handle the lose.
Let them know that we are together again
Let them know I'm smiling again.
Lord dry their tears and bless them with a love that death can't kill.

Copyright © suzume_b ... [ 2004-07-22 14:20:24]
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Re: Death (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 02:22:32 PM AEST
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Very emotional poem......you don't suck as a poet.... great write,

pixie xx

Re: Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Babigurl on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 02:28:29 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem i dont know what your talking about when you said you suck as a poet because that is so not true hunn ..keep em comin

Re: Death (User Rating: 1 )
by paula_kay23 on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 02:42:14 PM AEST
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very good poem, had a tear in my eye, anyone who can do that to me doesnt suck lol
look forward to reading more

paulax

Re: Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Always on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 02:54:11 PM AEST
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That was awsome.

Re: Death (User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 03:06:02 PM AEST
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When you said you sucked as a poet I thought maybe you were Louise Gluck. But no, good job.--the Moth

Re: Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Shadow on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 10:34:24 PM AEST
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That was so sweet. I love this. You are good. Keep these coming and never stop wrighting.

With admeration
Shadow

Re: Death (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 04:01:38 PM AEST
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Good write..You dont suck at least not at poems..

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