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Array ( [sid] => 57182 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => As I Sat There [time] => 2004-07-22 13:07:50 [hometext] => He is my rock... I don't know what I'd do without him [bodytext] => As I sat there outside,
Sat there alone & cried,
After we had another row,
Can we get over this somehow?

I know how much you hurt,
How much that my flame burnt,
I will surely do all that I can,
To turn on my inner cooling fan.

I thought that I had pushed,
You too far so you’d had enough,
But you are standing by my side,
Help me to calm my raging tide.

A love like ours is tough & strong,
Together is where we really belong,
Being lovers & not fighters,
I can feel the load becoming lighter.

You took me inside & held onto me,
Gave me love that was plain to see,
Told me you would see me through,
Thanks for everything you do.
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As I Sat There

Contributed by pixie on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 01:07:50 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

As I sat there outside,
Sat there alone & cried,
After we had another row,
Can we get over this somehow?

I know how much you hurt,
How much that my flame burnt,
I will surely do all that I can,
To turn on my inner cooling fan.

I thought that I had pushed,
You too far so you’d had enough,
But you are standing by my side,
Help me to calm my raging tide.

A love like ours is tough & strong,
Together is where we really belong,
Being lovers & not fighters,
I can feel the load becoming lighter.

You took me inside & held onto me,
Gave me love that was plain to see,
Told me you would see me through,
Thanks for everything you do.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2004-07-22 13:07:50]
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Re: As I Sat There (User Rating: 1 )
by xemptydecemberx on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 01:17:39 PM AEST
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thats...really really good. really good wording.

Re: As I Sat There (User Rating: 1 )
by WinterFawn on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 01:22:08 PM AEST
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Pixie...it sounds like there is so much passion in this relationship...be it doing battle or the firey passion of love..I hope things work out for you......you are very good at expressing your emotions in your writing.....great verse.

WinterFawn

Re: As I Sat There (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 01:32:05 PM AEST
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well done..............
Very good emotional poem.........

Re: As I Sat There (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 01:41:58 PM AEST
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so beautifully heartfelt, this poem would be a wonderful ecard:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: As I Sat There (User Rating: 1 )
by hooray_its_jen on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 03:31:03 PM AEST
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Wow....moy mouth is still wide open. 5 stars!

VERY great write, pixie!

Blessings
Love, Jenna

Re: As I Sat There (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 03:03:22 AM AEST
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Ahha..very beautiful girl you are..:-) venkat

Re: As I Sat There (User Rating: 1 )
by hrpuffnstuff on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 04:31:39 AM AEST
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aw pixie that is beautiful
takecare matey
and loadsacuddles to you
love hayleyxxxxxxxxx

Re: As I Sat There (User Rating: 1 )
by BrandySwanson on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 10:37:02 AM AEST
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beautifully written pixie so full of passion love it from start to finish. great job

Brandy

Re: As I Sat There (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 03:02:37 AM AEST
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'Tis not so fun to fight, but surely is fun making up......those were my thoughts as I read you nice little poem.
It's plain to see you are both being put under alot of stress......I hope this all changes soon....stress can certainly kill two people in love.....
Compassionate and loving is he...hand onto him as tightly as can be!
love you
consue

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