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Array ( [sid] => 57178 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Red River [time] => 2004-07-22 12:55:47 [hometext] => Please comment [bodytext] => Swimming in a red river
For itself it has created
Afterthought will give wisdom
Just a little bit belated

Pain will help confusion
Right now it's just the feeling
The only thing it knows
To keep it's thoughts from reeling

Each time it's cut
It shrinks a little more
Each time it's cut
It feels better than before

Red river running
This blood is not a waste
It can show to you
A beautifully painted face

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Red River

Contributed by _Raspberry_ on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 12:55:47 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Swimming in a red river
For itself it has created
Afterthought will give wisdom
Just a little bit belated

Pain will help confusion
Right now it's just the feeling
The only thing it knows
To keep it's thoughts from reeling

Each time it's cut
It shrinks a little more
Each time it's cut
It feels better than before

Red river running
This blood is not a waste
It can show to you
A beautifully painted face

***

Copyright © _Raspberry_ ... [ 2004-07-22 12:55:47]
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Re: Red River (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 01:08:47 PM AEST
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very grim write, sad and filled with emotion... great and dark write,

pixie xx

Re: Red River (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 01:13:22 PM AEST
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beautifully expression of feelings, im more inclined to give you a *big hug* though, love nessa

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Re: Red River (User Rating: 1 )
by SWAYLOS on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 01:44:59 PM AEST
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yo, that was fresh..
I like it....chek out my
new one..(Da Ghetto)

Re: Red River (User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 02:36:01 PM AEST
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I like the last four lines very much. Striking.--the Moth

Re: Red River (User Rating: 1 )
by xemptydecemberx on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 03:06:52 PM AEST
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very very very good poem.

Re: Red River (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 05:59:21 AM AEST
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Exceptionally well writen and composed, such graphic imagery, and so sad, darkness has new meaning....awesome poem.

Take care
Kindredblood_dragon

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