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Array ( [sid] => 5715 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Following the crush foot-steps [time] => 2002-10-27 15:15:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Over your breath, over your odour,
in remembrances fill time.
To spread out of dream, to tender recent imagination,
but then you put out the burning light yet – in ecstasy sink oneself.
(If even thought fly away – and then from me.)
Reap love from myself,
scatter after fields.
Drink by dew soak cheek.
And how many other bowed nearer to the ground,
agerly - also want to drink…but what for?
You have all the shells cover in eternity and in the boundlessness space.
Am I ever ask for a bit of fugitive beauty?
Here I am, no-account.
Days gone, but did I a part of myself?
It's look like that I am just a draw picture,
glittering still,
that torturing one's own restless soul.
Where am I, if I'm not reside?
Not now, not ever.
When I lie down in umbrage on my trees,
shed you then with me, live further?
Even are my steps lightweight
in zigzag night and with clouds company,
would you at that time again my turn light for the rest of the day
and shining even in the evening for me,
or just for those other?
Or I am not,
storm did not touched me.
So I just following the crush foot-steps,
will I sorry then?
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 32 [informant] => SA_RA [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Following the crush foot-steps

Contributed by SA_RA on Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 03:15:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Over your breath, over your odour,
in remembrances fill time.
To spread out of dream, to tender recent imagination,
but then you put out the burning light yet – in ecstasy sink oneself.
(If even thought fly away – and then from me.)
Reap love from myself,
scatter after fields.
Drink by dew soak cheek.
And how many other bowed nearer to the ground,
agerly - also want to drink…but what for?
You have all the shells cover in eternity and in the boundlessness space.
Am I ever ask for a bit of fugitive beauty?
Here I am, no-account.
Days gone, but did I a part of myself?
It's look like that I am just a draw picture,
glittering still,
that torturing one's own restless soul.
Where am I, if I'm not reside?
Not now, not ever.
When I lie down in umbrage on my trees,
shed you then with me, live further?
Even are my steps lightweight
in zigzag night and with clouds company,
would you at that time again my turn light for the rest of the day
and shining even in the evening for me,
or just for those other?
Or I am not,
storm did not touched me.
So I just following the crush foot-steps,
will I sorry then?

Copyright Â© SA_RA ... [ 2002-10-27 15:15:00]
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Re: Following the crush foot-steps (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 12:18:35 AM AEST
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nice write. =]

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