Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 16:52:57 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 57147 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I just wanted to cry [time] => 2004-07-22 08:48:26 [hometext] => i dont know..just random [bodytext] => I walked away,
leaving him to wonder why,
baby i just wanted to cry.
My world keeps falling apart,
and i dont have enough grace
to put it together.

I love you though,your my everything,
there was just nothing you could do,
i just wanted to cry,
i didnt want you to wipe the tears away.

I walked away,
leaving you to wonder,
I'll be back once my eyes show no pain,
I'll hold you so close,
baby you are what keeps my alive,
but the tears i cry need to dry alone. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 32 [informant] => gery_giggles [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

I just wanted to cry

Contributed by gery_giggles on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 08:48:26 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I walked away,
leaving him to wonder why,
baby i just wanted to cry.
My world keeps falling apart,
and i dont have enough grace
to put it together.

I love you though,your my everything,
there was just nothing you could do,
i just wanted to cry,
i didnt want you to wipe the tears away.

I walked away,
leaving you to wonder,
I'll be back once my eyes show no pain,
I'll hold you so close,
baby you are what keeps my alive,
but the tears i cry need to dry alone.

Copyright © gery_giggles ... [ 2004-07-22 08:48:26]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: I just wanted to cry (User Rating: 1 )
by AspenGlow on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 10:08:18 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Sometimes we need the time, to cry the tears, and to face the fears, to know the hurt, and to feel the pain, and they not knowing seem to take the blame. No one knows except for us, a time to take, a time to be, alone to cry just for us.

Beautiful poem, thanks for sharing.

Re: I just wanted to cry (User Rating: 1 )
by hooray_its_jen on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 10:40:35 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Very beautiful and emotional write. I understand how you feel, sometimes we just need to be alone, even when people are only trying to help. We need to work things out on our own sometimes, without them trying to do it all for us. Again, very nice write. 5 stars!

~Jenna

Re: I just wanted to cry (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 10:48:59 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

this is such a sad and emotional write...hang in there girl, *hugs you*

pixie xx

Re: I just wanted to cry (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 07:45:34 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

This is sad but i can relate...great write...i like it alot

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears

Re: I just wanted to cry (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 07:51:58 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

immense sadness, it just jumps right out at your readers, i guess sometimes we need to be alone but its comforting to know loving arms await you:) hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com