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Array ( [sid] => 57102 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Ashes [time] => 2004-07-21 23:46:21 [hometext] => ~~*~~Is There Ever An End?~~*~~ [bodytext] => The ashes lay by my bedside
For those ashes I mourn no more
For locked away in a deep dark place
All the memories that we had bourne
Oh the sweet memories
But not no more
Instead just shards of dark emptiness
They all take theyre place deep in my soul
As I struggle to forget the bad and good
And find myself dwelling in pain
No, I scream, I should
Not
Time numbs my reality
My life will never again be the same
But I must keep on going in so many ways
And your ashes will just sit
Sit at my bedside
Collecting dust and not much more
On day I will spill them and move along
Because for those ashes
I will mourn no more [comments] => 4 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 48 [informant] => RavenShadows [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

The Ashes

Contributed by RavenShadows on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 11:46:21 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

The ashes lay by my bedside
For those ashes I mourn no more
For locked away in a deep dark place
All the memories that we had bourne
Oh the sweet memories
But not no more
Instead just shards of dark emptiness
They all take theyre place deep in my soul
As I struggle to forget the bad and good
And find myself dwelling in pain
No, I scream, I should
Not
Time numbs my reality
My life will never again be the same
But I must keep on going in so many ways
And your ashes will just sit
Sit at my bedside
Collecting dust and not much more
On day I will spill them and move along
Because for those ashes
I will mourn no more

Copyright © RavenShadows ... [ 2004-07-21 23:46:21]
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Re: The Ashes (User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 12:04:05 AM AEST
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My condolences for your loss,in times like these,there is not much to say.I liked your poetic rhythm though and will be looking forward to reading more of your work.
PumpkinPie

Re: The Ashes (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 11:00:13 AM AEST
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very emotional write.....takecare,
pixie xx

Re: The Ashes (User Rating: 1 )
by sheri on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 01:57:18 PM AEST
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Sorry about your loss............I hope things are going better for you now. Great write.

Re: The Ashes (User Rating: 1 )
by Kimmie_mac on Wednesday, 19th July 2006 @ 01:10:10 AM AEST
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I hope time has healed your pain but your poem is great and very personal thanks for sharing. Kim

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