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Crushed between the shut door
Crushed and hurt at once I bled
Now all I see is red

In vengeance name I bring froth hell
Come forth hate and Ring your bell!
Lead my hand to his heart
Let his soul from this world depart…

Let my tears grace his cheek
Leave words of love to the meek!
Let my fire consume my blade
Let the life from his cheeks fade!

Bless my soul O darkened death
May the lord forgive my theft.
Dry my eyes with you wing
Let your sword bring forth its sting.

Let my die with my deed
This is all that I will plead.
My soul is yours when my war does end
May my lover know it’s love I send .

Goodbye my heart, goodbye my eyes
May god protect you from his lies.
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crushed

Contributed by Shadow on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 09:13:26 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

My heart lies on the floor
Crushed between the shut door
Crushed and hurt at once I bled
Now all I see is red

In vengeance name I bring froth hell
Come forth hate and Ring your bell!
Lead my hand to his heart
Let his soul from this world depart…

Let my tears grace his cheek
Leave words of love to the meek!
Let my fire consume my blade
Let the life from his cheeks fade!

Bless my soul O darkened death
May the lord forgive my theft.
Dry my eyes with you wing
Let your sword bring forth its sting.

Let my die with my deed
This is all that I will plead.
My soul is yours when my war does end
May my lover know it’s love I send .

Goodbye my heart, goodbye my eyes
May god protect you from his lies.

Copyright Â© Shadow ... [ 2004-07-21 21:13:26]
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Re: crushed (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 09:36:31 PM AEST
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well..this certainly is angry. let it out, just let it all out...in poem form that is. lol.

acy

Re: crushed (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 09:59:20 PM AEST
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I found this to be more dark than angry but emotional nontheless.
Great write, I liked the flow of words.

Re: crushed (User Rating: 1 )
by RavenShadows on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 11:53:12 PM AEST
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All I can say is...well.. WOW

Re: crushed (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 01:17:47 AM AEST
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Bless my soul O darkened death
May the lord forgive my theft.
Dry my eyes with you wing
Let your sword bring forth its sting.

nice one! this verse in particular, excellent poetry.

wildejohnny.

Re: crushed (User Rating: 1 )
by LoVeLy_4_StEvE on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 09:56:28 PM AEST
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Very angry. But it was good, filled with a lot of emotion. I hope to see more great work from you in the future.

Love N Stuff
~*Lovely_4_Steve*~

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