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[aid] => mick
[title] => satans hell
[time] => 2004-07-21 17:52:40
[hometext] => if you think about it...there wouldnt be a hell(a devil)if God hadnt made it(created it)....please comment!
[bodytext] => hollow indside no lost words just remembered still cant find what keeps him going power over strengh all this time the screams wake him up and he prays 'thank you my friend,for bearing me into this pit,of hell,iam not hell,the place where the souls fear most,and the night hides,that is hell,fear increases power,so at my greatest strengh iam,thank you...' he closes his eyes and the thunder surrounds him the whispers of the grey women the rain drops increased to lakes the snow,ice caps hell may seem hot inside your burning what left of your soul is on fire but your skin is frozen the world you knew is boxed in you shudder with pain as your insides are being crushed the wind a hurricane and your hair is standing on its back but keep reminding yourself your not really here,its just a state of mind wake up wake up your in a coffin the worms eating your dead flesh the maggots feeding on your insides i wonder did he feel like this the master from going so high to bottom endless he looks at me once so beautiful is cursed without doubt his face is mangled and his eyes are always bleeding his face stainded red with the blood his pupils black and the whiteness grey everything about him revolts me but i must ask i must know he opens his mouth and its like my ears bleed but i must listen i must how did it,what did it?! 'you want to know?'he cries,my ears bleed,their tearing 'yes'i cry he laughs and my ears split i cry out in agony 'ok,i will tell you...the world i knew was so bright your eyes hurt,the sun so warm,clothes was uneeded,the light,you finally got use to,and you loved it,cherrised its radience,it wasnt such as a place,but a feeling,complete immortal happiness,the grey bubbles,stress,were relieved and you could fly,float,like clouds,but clouds,would be to heavy,this was utter bliss,wings sprouted from my back,the ridge by my shoulders,they felt so soft,not knew,like my best friend,i began to love it,love it all,my reflection in the rivers,in the sea,i looked so beautiful,i was loving me more than heaven,and HE was realising it,every second he was disliking it,i knew because he favoured me the most,i was the ONE angel,HE bansished me after,sent me to my own individual hell,sin after sin,my face grew mangled my body mishapen,and that truely killed me,this is my hell as much as it is urs,you see,no face,is as sinned as my own,so as i look on at you,and the souls i gather,i pity myself,and cry inside,for that love,for that face,the light,i want it all back,HE cursed me with this,to remember and not forget ever,that i was once besides HIM,and HE will never forget,and he made sure,neither will i....' his voice droned on and on into eternity and i never forgot that hell is a place of innerself and hell didnt seem that painful and sinned damned dark or hated i found my inner me if only he could of found it when he needed to like i... too late...................... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Hannah_Heaven [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
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