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Array ( [sid] => 57070 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => HAUNTED BY THE DEMONS! [time] => 2004-07-21 16:02:56 [hometext] => After every thing that’s happened lately I thought I could cope.But I found I couldn’t when I returned to the streets again.I wondered the streets frantically with no access to the multi-story car park roof.Then I gave up and ran because I was becoming... [bodytext] => Haunted by the demons around me...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I’m walking down the street.
Scared of know I’ll meet.
Some that see me stare.
While others stop and glare.
I’m feeling pretty faint.
And no one can relate.
Emotionally feeling destroyed.
Sucked dry and maybe a little paranoid.
Any noise is SO loud!
… I run through out the crowds…
There are different voices,
In different tones.
I’m surrounded by others,
But still feeling SO alone!!!
Feeling so scared,
I’ll be attacked.
Beaten and bruised,
Or rapped and smacked…!

There’s an echo behind me.
I quickly turn round.
The looks surround me.
They boom out their sound…
Then I hear sirens,
From behind my head.
My stomach grips in panic,
And fear breaks loose, filling me with dread…

I ran away from it!
My heart beating fast.
I kept thinking that any second,
My breath could be my last.
“Any one could jump me,
And beat me until I bleed”.
“And the crowds would mean nothing,
Because they’re demons around me!!!”


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HAUNTED BY THE DEMONS!

Contributed by deathdrop on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 04:02:56 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Haunted by the demons around me...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I’m walking down the street.
Scared of know I’ll meet.
Some that see me stare.
While others stop and glare.
I’m feeling pretty faint.
And no one can relate.
Emotionally feeling destroyed.
Sucked dry and maybe a little paranoid.
Any noise is SO loud!
… I run through out the crowds…
There are different voices,
In different tones.
I’m surrounded by others,
But still feeling SO alone!!!
Feeling so scared,
I’ll be attacked.
Beaten and bruised,
Or rapped and smacked…!

There’s an echo behind me.
I quickly turn round.
The looks surround me.
They boom out their sound…
Then I hear sirens,
From behind my head.
My stomach grips in panic,
And fear breaks loose, filling me with dread…

I ran away from it!
My heart beating fast.
I kept thinking that any second,
My breath could be my last.
“Any one could jump me,
And beat me until I bleed”.
“And the crowds would mean nothing,
Because they’re demons around me!!!”






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Re: HAUNTED BY THE DEMONS! (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 04:28:08 PM AEST
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this poem moves so well up to its conclusion, good work kinda makes me feel paranoid!

wildejohnny.


Re: HAUNTED BY THE DEMONS! (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 08:55:05 PM AEST
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And deathdrop you are probably right for the demons use people here on earth to get to us! This was a very fast moving poem, and scared me too! I've felt the same panic in my younger life manytimes.
Poetic hugs
consue


Re: HAUNTED BY THE DEMONS! (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 10:04:20 PM AEST
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excellent write. =]




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