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Array ( [sid] => 57044 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Suicide Letter [time] => 2004-07-21 12:21:37 [hometext] => [bodytext] => sign your name neatly at the end of this letter
closing with these words that make everything better
reread and recheck all the things that you said
because before they can ask you about it,
you'll already be dead
dont forget to add your dreams
and what you wanted out of life..
oh, and name your sin..
a bottle of pills? or the kitchen knife?
did you OD or slit your wrists?
will you suceed or did you miss?
List you goodbyes one by one
Cause when your out of feeling the list is done.
If your hands go numb, your
So write fast and dont drag it out
Dont leave out any names, or end it in doubt.
Your running out of lines and feeling in your hands
So you end this now with your intentions and plans.
Close the last sentance, sign your name
Leaving no one to feel bad, no one to blame.
Seal the envelope, close it tight
This is the last time you'll ever see sunlight...

-Jacque A. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 226 [topic] => 36 [informant] => xemptydecemberx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Suicide Letter

Contributed by xemptydecemberx on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 12:21:37 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

sign your name neatly at the end of this letter
closing with these words that make everything better
reread and recheck all the things that you said
because before they can ask you about it,
you'll already be dead
dont forget to add your dreams
and what you wanted out of life..
oh, and name your sin..
a bottle of pills? or the kitchen knife?
did you OD or slit your wrists?
will you suceed or did you miss?
List you goodbyes one by one
Cause when your out of feeling the list is done.
If your hands go numb, your
So write fast and dont drag it out
Dont leave out any names, or end it in doubt.
Your running out of lines and feeling in your hands
So you end this now with your intentions and plans.
Close the last sentance, sign your name
Leaving no one to feel bad, no one to blame.
Seal the envelope, close it tight
This is the last time you'll ever see sunlight...

-Jacque A.

Copyright © xemptydecemberx ... [ 2004-07-21 12:21:37]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Suicide Letter (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 01:39:28 PM AEST
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chilling and sad write, you expressed this brilliantly.... keep writing,

pixie xx

Re: Suicide Letter (User Rating: 1 )
by lilblkcat on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 03:48:41 AM AEST
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thanks for posting. its a great poem, i enjoyed reading it.

Re: Suicide Letter (User Rating: 1 )
by screwup on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 05:23:09 PM AEST
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so dark...yet so amazing...keep this up and write your pain out.

Re: Suicide Letter (User Rating: 1 )
by shrunkin_fool34142316 on Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 08:14:51 PM AEST
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i loved it good write i really enjoy hearingthese poems cuz i once was suicidal working throught it tho... things will wwork out the way god intended 4 both u & i & every1 else everything happens 4 a reason & remember

Paslms 56:3 read it ova & ova

Re: Suicide Letter (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 06:57:44 PM AEST
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Yes... Jacque... very chilling... I know what ur going thru... I've been there and tried doing that... I know where ur coming from with this... tha's one reason I can talk w/ Deanna so easily... I know the feelings...
Take care...
~Donna~

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