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on softest wings of yesterday
it came once then sailed away
the beating of the hope of hearts
whispered quick
that was its way,
it did not mind with much delay
to steal a kiss and blow goodbyes
faire soul so free; yet tell it lies
oh, love flew in;
then held at bay,
birdsong went on as before; whilst
love whimpered quietly for more
dying alone one sunny dark day
whatever came 'til
come what may.
§* *§
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on softest wings
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 08:59:46 AM in AEST
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on softest wings of yesterday
it came once then sailed away
the beating of the hope of hearts
whispered quick
that was its way,
it did not mind with much delay
to steal a kiss and blow goodbyes
faire soul so free; yet tell it lies
oh, love flew in;
then held at bay,
birdsong went on as before; whilst
love whimpered quietly for more
dying alone one sunny dark day
whatever came 'til
come what may.
§* *§
*|*
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Re: on softest wings
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 09:12:35 AM AEST
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Very intriguing. Reminded me of being out on the sea for some reason. I liked it.
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by WinterFawn on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 09:17:48 AM AEST
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the beating of the hope of hearts
~sigh~......
Simply beautiful.....I love your verses...
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Re: on softest wings
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 09:22:01 AM AEST
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So sadly beautiful. Your words always touch my heart and soul.
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 09:23:13 AM AEST
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there is such a wistful fragile beauty in your words. This was touching and sad and lovely. I especially liked the way you ended it.
Thanks for writing. |
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Re: on softest wings
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by blueheart on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 09:38:53 AM AEST
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| Such beautiful words you put forth. |
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Re: on softest wings
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by BrandySwanson on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 11:00:27 AM AEST
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so beautiful ladyfawn your words touched me. great job
Brandy |
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Re: on softest wings
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 11:09:30 AM AEST
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Ahhhhh...This one is a breathless beauty!
I really like the atmosphere it lends!
Well doen yet againnnnnnnn! :-)
Angel always...joni |
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Re: on softest wings
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 01:49:37 PM AEST
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this is wonderfully, beautiful Nessa, *hugs you*
pixie xx |
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Re: on softest wings
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by theMoth on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 01:58:11 PM AEST
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| You go, girl.--The Moth |
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Re: on softest wings
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 06:01:40 PM AEST
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"twas like a dream that appeared, and then disappeared when you awakened.....this was wonderful Nessa.......you were really taken.........in.......I can feel it.
Lovely words from a lovely lady
Love
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Re: on softest wings
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by venkat on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 03:07:41 AM AEST
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| very sad but beautifully done...aww..hugs my friend..;-) venkat |
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Re: on softest wings
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by ilimow on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 08:44:58 PM AEST
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Beautifully written.
Enjoyed the read.
:)
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Re: on softest wings
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by Always on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 10:00:21 PM AEST
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| Sweet!!!! *s* |
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Re: on softest wings
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by Gentledove on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 12:24:17 AM AEST
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beautifully written ladyfawn.
Gentledove |
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Re: on softest wings
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by tifrob on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 01:23:18 AM AEST
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This is a wonderful poem. It gave the feeling of a sad longing. Very expressive and heartfelt.
J~ |
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Re: on softest wings
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by pvd on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 01:26:25 PM AEST
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Beauty mixed with the bittersweet. I could hear the fluttering of your words... or was that my heart.
Excellent movement-- classical |
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Re: on softest wings
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by Stellar on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 12:02:47 PM AEST
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| A bittersweet poem, but it gave me a peaceful feeling. Extremely well written. |
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Re: on softest wings
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by critterhideaway on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 02:14:36 AM AEST
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| Beautiful! Sad but well written@:]---- |
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Re: on softest wings
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 03:13:46 PM AEST
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Beautiful expressions....Well written....
sigh...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: on softest wings
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by apollo on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 03:33:45 PM AEST
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this is quite touching and very thoughtul. your words make my mind soar. i love this, i love all your work it is emaculate. thanks for sharing this. it was priceless.
brandon |
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Re: on softest wings
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by Sagacious on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 03:15:53 PM AEST
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| This is my favorite poem from the site, to date. Granted, I've only been here a few days, and I've come to expect a better-than-average quality for Internet poetry--but this piece is absolutely superb. Its consistency and flow is pure magic, and I can tell it is a magical mindset from whence your gift does emanate. There is no rambling, here, nor listless plodding through directionless verse. All is in motion, progressing ever forward, logically, yet unabashedly in a free-spirited manner. And what a great drawing to accompany your vision--very publishable, methinks. Bless'd Be and Fare Thee Lightly; you shall hear from me anon! With Greatest Respect, -KAC- |
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Re: on softest wings
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by Elena on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 03:44:52 PM AEST
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Lovely poetry, admirable structure and nice pastel...
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Re: on softest wings
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by Elena on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 03:45:18 PM AEST
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Lovely poetry, admirable structure and nice pastel...
E |
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Re: on softest wings
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by arden on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 10:41:20 PM AEST
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very beautiful nes.
loved the rhyme and the wording, just everything is so cool.
i loved this.
5 stars
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Re: on softest wings
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by katyqueen35 on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 11:27:22 PM AEST
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Beautiful and sad.A nice combonation.........
well written poem.......
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Re: on softest wings
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 03:52:55 PM AEST
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| like a wlcome breeze on a warm summers night, leaves you longing for more... |
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Re: on softest wings
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by RhythmBndt on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 04:32:45 PM AEST
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| Beautiful write :) |
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Re: on softest wings
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by emystar on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:21:42 AM AEST
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Beautifull graphics and write.
luv, huggs,
eemy |
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Re: on softest wings
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 03:08:32 AM AEST
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An exceptional write, beautifully composed, such inner beauty,it breathes such darkened melodies,
Awesome one Ladyfawn |
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Re: on softest wings
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by bernard on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 03:26:58 AM AEST
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| beautiful poem5/5 bernard. |
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Re: on softest wings
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by Twisterchaser on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 10:43:13 PM AEST
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You are an insperation, words so freely flow. once read they set the mind a glow. Thanks
Andy |
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Re: on softest wings
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by Merry on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 05:15:47 AM AEST
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a very sad poem, so beautifully written. I hope the sun comes back into your heart one day. Hugs
Merry |
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Re: on softest wings
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by ginsdance on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 04:56:12 PM AEST
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As always a beautiful passionate write, Nessa. Makes the heart long for all things past... and all things future too. Great write! I'm glad I'm finally back on the site so that I can read your stuff again! :)
Ginsdance
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Re: on softest wings
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by Overstated on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 02:44:51 PM AEST
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| a remarkable short concise piece of writing very well done to you!!! |
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Re: on softest wings
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 12:37:15 AM AEST
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Very good writing, my friend.
Awesome graphics.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: on softest wings
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 02:10:19 AM AEST
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this was a beautiful poem. i love your work. i especially liked this use of an oxymoron:
"dying alone one sunny dark day".
this was excellent. |
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Re: on softest wings
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by Alovinmann on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 03:43:25 PM AEST
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Sweet Lady once named mine
Your writings are in my heart as you are always. |
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Re: on softest wings
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by Cynthia on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 11:32:56 AM AEST
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| Nessa, this write is wonderful. It's also sad. I have been awestruck by your writing. Good job my friend. *S* Cynthia |
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by Archie on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 02:55:25 PM AEST
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| Great poem. As usual you know how to spark people. |
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Re: on softest wings
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 01:08:32 AM AEST
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WOW
your flows are so excellent |
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Re: on softest wings
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 09:06:21 PM AEST
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hrm, i dont really know what to say about this piece. this didnt really touch me like most of your poems do, and i just dont know if its just the topic or how you wrote it, but its not as good as some of your others ive seen, but its good nontheless. very nice,
"to steal a kiss and blow goodbyes" |
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by Former_Member on
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what a beautifully written poem.
-phil |
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by Nonefound on
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| like it, wish I could write that well. |
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by Blackheart on
Tuesday, 8th July 2014 @ 10:48:31 PM AEST
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So elegant and lovely from beginning to end, I'm amazed yet again by your poetry
Hugs & love,
Donavan |
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by colinb on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2014 @ 02:23:42 AM AEST
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| A beautifull written poem |
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