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Array ( [sid] => 57019 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bleeding tears [time] => 2004-07-21 08:18:09 [hometext] => Raphael again....i got lots of these lol [bodytext] => Am i the only one left in this place,
left to dream in black and white,
only to fall away in bleeding hearts.
Creating little angels
to carry me away,
brought a pain dreams can never erase.
I hoped to maybe find you there,
with open arms.
Ready to be the one i remembered.
The lose of you
tore my heart apart,
the memory of you caused a pain
beating hard on my soul.

Bleeding tears of blood down my cheek,
scar away a smile
only dreams can revive.
I live in a world where no more angels can fly.
Left to maybe one day
drown in my hoplessness.

To hold you again,
taste your lips,
kiss your heart is a virtue
the gods can never grant me. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 68 [informant] => gery_giggles [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => fictional )

Bleeding tears

Contributed by gery_giggles on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 08:18:09 AM in AEST
Topic: fictional

Am i the only one left in this place,
left to dream in black and white,
only to fall away in bleeding hearts.
Creating little angels
to carry me away,
brought a pain dreams can never erase.
I hoped to maybe find you there,
with open arms.
Ready to be the one i remembered.
The lose of you
tore my heart apart,
the memory of you caused a pain
beating hard on my soul.

Bleeding tears of blood down my cheek,
scar away a smile
only dreams can revive.
I live in a world where no more angels can fly.
Left to maybe one day
drown in my hoplessness.

To hold you again,
taste your lips,
kiss your heart is a virtue
the gods can never grant me.

Copyright © gery_giggles ... [ 2004-07-21 08:18:09]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Bleeding tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 09:04:56 AM AEST
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beautifully written

kiss your heart is a virtue
the gods can never grant me.

great ending, very well done.

wildejohnny.

Re: Bleeding tears (User Rating: 1 )
by BrandySwanson on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 11:02:33 AM AEST
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beautiful poem great job

Brandy

Re: Bleeding tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Black13 on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 11:15:48 AM AEST
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This was beautifully done.
The flow and wording to it was awesome.
Very sad and... Don't know how to describe it.
I do know I liked it though.
Excellent write.
The first two lines though...

Re: Bleeding tears (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 01:51:44 PM AEST
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Awwww Gery *hugs to you* such a great poem, yet filled with sadness ..... thanks for being such a great friend to me,

talkecare

pixie xx

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