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Array ( [sid] => 56977 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Plea to God [time] => 2004-07-20 22:16:54 [hometext] => I want to go back now [bodytext] => It's hard to wake up
Why am i here?
What did i do?
Why are you putting me through this punishment?
Will you take me back?
I no longer wish to be here
This is hell
But then again
Its only life
How hard is it to take
My luck
I will be thrown back
But god i don't want to go back
I want to be dead
I want to be back in your hands
I'm tired of crying
I want to be dieing
Please if i try take me back
Don't make me live this life
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 13 [informant] => rugby_player [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Plea to God

Contributed by rugby_player on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 10:16:54 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

It's hard to wake up
Why am i here?
What did i do?
Why are you putting me through this punishment?
Will you take me back?
I no longer wish to be here
This is hell
But then again
Its only life
How hard is it to take
My luck
I will be thrown back
But god i don't want to go back
I want to be dead
I want to be back in your hands
I'm tired of crying
I want to be dieing
Please if i try take me back
Don't make me live this life

Copyright © rugby_player ... [ 2004-07-20 22:16:54]
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Re: Plea to God (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 05:59:28 PM AEST
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This is a very very sad, and yet powerful write I dont like the whole fact that you are wanting to die...and hopefully these arent your thoughts now...I would truly hate to lose a friend of your kind...your are one of my favorite people in life...I want you to know that...so please keep your head held high...and I will be on more...soon...so dont get into your habbits please...

much love,
Dani....

but again another great write...I loved it...

Re: Plea to God (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 03:04:36 AM AEST
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It's easy to die but hard to live.
Hang in there cause u r a great writer and there's plenty to write about.
I send u luv, huggs, smiles, peace, hope, joy,
emy

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