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[aid] => mick
[title] => Mountains Of Pride
[time] => 2004-07-20 21:41:52
[hometext] => A scene I caught while travelling in my car.
[bodytext] => Mountains of pride standing tall,
Gentle giants looking down on me,
Little white clouds hovering above,
Swirling around the mountain peak.
In the sun, verdant blankets sing,
Dotted with colours of variation,
Smitten by its aura of majesty,
So in love with its perfection.
Emerald mists we watch from afar,
We wish to be ensconced in it,
To live above the troubled ground,
To sleep in song beyond all reach.
Mountains of pride standing tall,
Isolated beauty, tinted with trees,
Towering power submerged with life,
Our eyes reside in natures treat.
[comments] => 12
[counter] => 236
[topic] => 30
[informant] => blueheart
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
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[pollID] => 0
[score] => 25
[ratings] => 5
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => PoemsonBeauty
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Mountains Of Pride
Contributed by
blueheart
on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 09:41:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
PoemsonBeauty
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Mountains of pride standing tall,
Gentle giants looking down on me,
Little white clouds hovering above,
Swirling around the mountain peak.
In the sun, verdant blankets sing,
Dotted with colours of variation,
Smitten by its aura of majesty,
So in love with its perfection.
Emerald mists we watch from afar,
We wish to be ensconced in it,
To live above the troubled ground,
To sleep in song beyond all reach.
Mountains of pride standing tall,
Isolated beauty, tinted with trees,
Towering power submerged with life,
Our eyes reside in natures treat.
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blueheart
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2004-07-20 21:41:52]
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Re: Mountains Of Pride
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by TheVoice on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 09:45:03 PM AEST
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simply beautiful.
the voice
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Re: Mountains Of Pride
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by MLCstar on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 09:51:08 PM AEST
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| You verbally paint such a beautiful picture. Is nature not awe inspiring or what? You wrote it so well. Thank you for posting such a gem. |
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Re: Mountains Of Pride
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 10:37:22 PM AEST
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Yes, I love the mountains. They stand in such regal splendor. Mother Nature's finest work I think. This is a splendid piece.
Rita |
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Re: Mountains Of Pride
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 10:37:49 PM AEST
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ohhhhh this is beautiful, it sounds like you were here visiting me, we are so blessed to see these things, your talent shines here:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Mountains Of Pride
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by AspenGlow on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 11:46:37 PM AEST
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Yes...the song America the beautiful was penned form the mountains I live in.....Tis God country you see, walk among them gently and softly, and whisper when you speak. The rugged are tender and the sights from above, make one feel the brushing of angels on the sleeve. The cool crisp breeze if you listen very closely, are the songs, sweet songs of Heavens host, and the scent of pine, and the sweet smell of snow, tis angels breath gently kissing the face.
Your poem is beautiful, thank you for sharing. |
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Re: Mountains Of Pride
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 09:09:06 AM AEST
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You are so gifted. There is just no other word for this type of seasoned poetry.
The imagery, wording and flawlessness just makes me speechless at this point.
Very high marks and I would love to see you get this one published.
Kie : ) |
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Re: Mountains Of Pride
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 08:51:35 PM AEST
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Blue heart our minds are running on the same theme today.....I just posted a poem ab out Majestic Mountains......don't you just love them?
This is absolutely beautifulllllll.your imagery is fantastic!
Lovely write
ConSue |
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Re: Mountains Of Pride
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by faith_my_eyes on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 10:28:12 PM AEST
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| Just... beautiful. The imagery is amazing, the flow is impeccable and the style is very scholarly. I love it. |
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Re: Mountains Of Pride
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by Silent-No-More on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 11:00:41 PM AEST
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Majestic, I think, is the perfect word to describe this piece. Reading this - makes me long to have been there next to you. Beautifully, wonderfully done.
Thanks so much for sharing this,
SNM
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Re: Mountains Of Pride
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 11:57:11 PM AEST
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How greatly refreshing..marvellous beauty..
clouds swirling around the mountain tops..
Emerald mists..tinted with trees..so sweet..
I have these scenes in my mind.Oh..Hanna
This is one of your most beautiful poems..
I am very glad to read this..:-) venkat |
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Re: Mountains Of Pride
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by Ronald on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 08:28:01 AM AEST
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| You are definitely a talented poet! Great poem! |
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Re: Mountains Of Pride
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 05:16:16 AM AEST
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Heavenly beautifull.
huggs, luv,
emy |
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