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Array ( [sid] => 56962 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => eVeRYoNe LeaVeS [time] => 2004-07-20 20:17:16 [hometext] => Yep, Here's my cry for attention. [bodytext] => You promised me forever
And gave me two months
I gave you my heart and soul
And now you're breaking it to pieces.

I live each day hoping
Tomorrow will be a little better
I hope each day for the reason
That tomorrow wont ever come.

These trembling hands memorize the cold metal
These shakey legs tread carpet
These tired eyes cry until the bleed
This obliterated mind focuses on good byes.

You promised me forever
Like everyone else did
You disappear before its began
Like everyone else does.

I'm breaking from the inside
This cool demeanor losing control
I'm hiding from the sunshine
This obvious heartache taking it's toll.

These trembling hands memorize the cold silver
These shakey legs tread the kitchen tile
These tired eyes cry the hatred out
This razorblade slices through the already dead skin.

You Promised me forever
I gave you blood and tears
You leave me hanging from the ceiling
With my blood on my hands.

I'm giving up and I'm fed up
Because everyone leaves
I'm taking this to heart
Because no one ever really cared.

These trembling hands memorize the dying flesh
These shakey legs tread through air
These tired eyes blind their last vision
This rope initates good bye...

Everyone leaves-
While I bleed.

This is my last CrY-
This is my last GooD-ByE. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 36 [informant] => xslashxprettyxskinx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
eVeRYoNe LeaVeS

Contributed by xslashxprettyxskinx on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 08:17:16 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



You promised me forever
And gave me two months
I gave you my heart and soul
And now you're breaking it to pieces.

I live each day hoping
Tomorrow will be a little better
I hope each day for the reason
That tomorrow wont ever come.

These trembling hands memorize the cold metal
These shakey legs tread carpet
These tired eyes cry until the bleed
This obliterated mind focuses on good byes.

You promised me forever
Like everyone else did
You disappear before its began
Like everyone else does.

I'm breaking from the inside
This cool demeanor losing control
I'm hiding from the sunshine
This obvious heartache taking it's toll.

These trembling hands memorize the cold silver
These shakey legs tread the kitchen tile
These tired eyes cry the hatred out
This razorblade slices through the already dead skin.

You Promised me forever
I gave you blood and tears
You leave me hanging from the ceiling
With my blood on my hands.

I'm giving up and I'm fed up
Because everyone leaves
I'm taking this to heart
Because no one ever really cared.

These trembling hands memorize the dying flesh
These shakey legs tread through air
These tired eyes blind their last vision
This rope initates good bye...

Everyone leaves-
While I bleed.

This is my last CrY-
This is my last GooD-ByE.




Copyright © xslashxprettyxskinx ... [ 2004-07-20 20:17:16]
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Re: eVeRYoNe LeaVeS (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 08:46:11 PM AEST
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awww lindsey, sweetie this is so sad but even in your pain you write with such beauty, god your ending was so vivid, extra big hugs n' love nessa x

@->>->:-


Re: eVeRYoNe LeaVeS (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 09:57:56 PM AEST
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That is really sad i'm sooo sry about how you feel...i know how it feels when everyone pretty much abandons u...be strong you'll make it through it....it was a beautiful write though...your pain is soo clear....excellent job

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears


Re: eVeRYoNe LeaVeS (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhea on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 10:43:23 PM AEST
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Very well written! You should be proud! Your writing technique is awesome. You explain and elaborate on how you feel so well....Congrats!


Re: eVeRYoNe LeaVeS (User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 02:16:44 AM AEST
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Heart-breakingly beautiful Lindsey, your way with words is astounding. And even more amazing the how you sqeeze every last bit of emotion from each line. What else can I say...this one pierces the soul.

Suffering three simultaneous heart attacks,
-V.S.


Re: eVeRYoNe LeaVeS (User Rating: 1 )
by Dawny on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 06:26:15 AM AEST
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Oh Lindsey, this is so beautiful yet so very sad. I know the feeling of abandonment, and the pain it brings. Know that I will listen if you want to rant xx

Equisite poem

Love Dawny xxx


Re: eVeRYoNe LeaVeS (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 05:17:43 PM AEST
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Oh Lindsey,
I'm so sorry that once again you were hurt.
Never assume how things will turn out.....just hope, but always be ready for the "wrongs"
Yet, through all of your pain......your disdain.....you were able to write a beautiful piece of painful poetry.
In my prayers lindsey
love you
consue




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