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Array ( [sid] => 56961 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You were so contagious [time] => 2004-07-20 19:58:29 [hometext] => about my ex who decided to annoy me [bodytext] => He stole my heart when i wanted it so bad.
Giving me a new life,
one i always hated,
yet i lied about it hoping it would pass.
Leaving me to myself.

Babe you turned me against
what i believed,
you held my heart in your hand,
leaving me to pray it wouldnt be crushed.
You dont remember,but i do.

Yet like rain over fire,
you ruined an innocent girl
and drowned her in you own hate.
What did you expect to find
in my shaky hands?

I bleed so deep,
cutting myself to only find a stronger will.
You were so contagious,
i cried to become a part of you.

But babe,i fell down in your heart,
left to remember dreams
i never tried to bring back.
You were so contagious,
i forgot to try to live.

I bled to find you again,
now i only wish for it all
to be a lost memory.
Leave me to myself.

You were so contagious. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 6 [informant] => gery_giggles [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

You were so contagious

Contributed by gery_giggles on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 07:58:29 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

He stole my heart when i wanted it so bad.
Giving me a new life,
one i always hated,
yet i lied about it hoping it would pass.
Leaving me to myself.

Babe you turned me against
what i believed,
you held my heart in your hand,
leaving me to pray it wouldnt be crushed.
You dont remember,but i do.

Yet like rain over fire,
you ruined an innocent girl
and drowned her in you own hate.
What did you expect to find
in my shaky hands?

I bleed so deep,
cutting myself to only find a stronger will.
You were so contagious,
i cried to become a part of you.

But babe,i fell down in your heart,
left to remember dreams
i never tried to bring back.
You were so contagious,
i forgot to try to live.

I bled to find you again,
now i only wish for it all
to be a lost memory.
Leave me to myself.

You were so contagious.

Copyright © gery_giggles ... [ 2004-07-20 19:58:29]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: You were so contagious (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 09:48:31 PM AEST
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I had a relationship like that once. It was very destructive to me. I relate to this very well. Great write.

Rita

Re: You were so contagious (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 09:58:43 PM AEST
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this was so sad. i was drawn very deeply into this write. it was very powerful and just packed with sad emotion. greatly done. great talent.
Arden

Re: You were so contagious (User Rating: 1 )
by Dawny on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 06:29:31 AM AEST
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I agree, this is very powerful and emotional. Not been in that situation, my heart goes out to you

Love Dawny xx

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