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Where exactly you and I stand,
I figured of all the people that I knew,
I had found an ally in you,
For me to confess, now that was hard,
You ignoring me is leaving scars,
I can't imagine why you don't call,
Did I screw up and ruin it all?
At least just tell me that I wrong,
Why are you making me wait so long?
If I was mistaken please let me know,
Then I can try and let it go. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 55 [informant] => dusty [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

Should Have Lied.

Contributed by dusty on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 06:43:06 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

I really thought you'd understand,
Where exactly you and I stand,
I figured of all the people that I knew,
I had found an ally in you,
For me to confess, now that was hard,
You ignoring me is leaving scars,
I can't imagine why you don't call,
Did I screw up and ruin it all?
At least just tell me that I wrong,
Why are you making me wait so long?
If I was mistaken please let me know,
Then I can try and let it go.

Copyright © dusty ... [ 2004-07-20 18:43:06]
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Re: Should Have Lied. (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 07:06:56 PM AEST
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OMG!! This can be so true....BUT I always tell the truth...no matter how much it hurt... and I have lost many a friend (Or so I thought) because of it......
Great write....
Jenni

Re: Should Have Lied. (User Rating: 1 )
by Kirby on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 07:59:38 PM AEST
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This was a tottaly great poem and it is sooo true. Yet, I find myself hieding behind the wonderful web of lies! The truth will set you free. Love::::Kirby

Did I say I liked this poem?

Re: Should Have Lied. (User Rating: 1 )
by Babigurl on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 08:21:47 PM AEST
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Beautiful it can not be expressed any better way your a wonderful writer

Re: Should Have Lied. (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissylee on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 08:45:41 PM AEST
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even though the truth may hurt i have always found it is the better way to go... great write

Re: Should Have Lied. (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 12:22:56 AM AEST
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Funny... I was just having those "have I said too much" kind of thoughts today. The post-sharing worrying is so familiar to me. it's very well conveyed here. Nicely done.

Thanks for sharing this,
SNM

Re: Should Have Lied. (User Rating: 1 )
by BrandySwanson on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 11:46:44 AM AEST
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this was so good I liked it, but always remember telling the truth in a relationship is always better than telling a lie. The old saying is honesty is the best policy.

Brandy

Re: Should Have Lied. (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 10:22:24 PM AEST
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I really like this. it's pretty cool poem

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