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Array ( [sid] => 56950 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Daddy's Gone Away From Me [time] => 2004-07-20 18:08:36 [hometext] => For my dad who passed away on his way home yesterday [bodytext] => My daddy has gone away from me
To heaven up above
My daddy has gone away from me
And he took with him so much love
To suffer for such a long long time
Then have the lord set you free
I know that your at peace right now
And that should be good enough for me
But its not
I want my daddy back
The smiles and the tears
I want my daddy back
The man who erased all my fears
The man who always stood tall and firm
Who never gave in an inch
The man who made me always behave
Who never let me stray an inch
So I always stood tall I always stood fast
I hope I made you proud
But now your gone and Im in pain
While you watch me from above the clouds
I dont want to set you free
Daddy I dont know how
I want you here with us right now
Not gone from us like you are now
Show me how to let you go
How to live without you here
Oh my daddy how I love you
I dont know what I'll do without you here. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 222 [topic] => 39 [informant] => RavenShadows [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
Daddy's Gone Away From Me

Contributed by RavenShadows on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 06:08:36 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief



My daddy has gone away from me
To heaven up above
My daddy has gone away from me
And he took with him so much love
To suffer for such a long long time
Then have the lord set you free
I know that your at peace right now
And that should be good enough for me
But its not
I want my daddy back
The smiles and the tears
I want my daddy back
The man who erased all my fears
The man who always stood tall and firm
Who never gave in an inch
The man who made me always behave
Who never let me stray an inch
So I always stood tall I always stood fast
I hope I made you proud
But now your gone and Im in pain
While you watch me from above the clouds
I dont want to set you free
Daddy I dont know how
I want you here with us right now
Not gone from us like you are now
Show me how to let you go
How to live without you here
Oh my daddy how I love you
I dont know what I'll do without you here.




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Re: Daddy's Gone Away From Me (User Rating: 1 )
by SWAYLOS on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 06:16:01 PM AEST
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I LIKE THE FEELIN U PUT IN THAT
ONE ..IM SURE YOUR DADDY WOULD
B PROUD OF YOUR POEMS.
.........R.I.P. POPS........


Re: Daddy's Gone Away From Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 06:18:06 PM AEST
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OMG!!! I am terribly sorry to hear this.... My thoughts and prayers are with you and your family.... Geez...does it ever end????
*Tears*
Jenni


Re: Daddy's Gone Away From Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Babigurl on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 08:34:51 PM AEST
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I'm very sorry to hear what happend ..Very sad indeed ..you will go on you just need some time to cope


Re: Daddy's Gone Away From Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 08:48:10 PM AEST
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I am so very sorry for your loss. My thoughts and prayers are with you and your family. I lost someone very dear to me two months ago. The pain will heal in time.

Rita


Re: Daddy's Gone Away From Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 09:28:04 PM AEST
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I think he would tell you that he never went too far away as long as he lives in your heart.
I am so sorry to hear of your loss, and in time the pain will heal, but again, keep his memory alive and he will live through you!
My prayers go out to you and your family during this time. Be strong. Daddy IS proud of you and who you've become. 0:-)
Angel always...godspeed...joni


Re: Daddy's Gone Away From Me (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 09:56:38 PM AEST
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Oh I'm so sorry to hear this, I'm really really sorry. My prayers go out to you.




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