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Isn’t the one your with
I love him but he’s not with me
He loves me but I don’t love him
I know this sounds confusing
But if you only knew
The pain that this has caused me
It’s eating me alive
So now I’m left alone to think
I don’t know what to do
Should I leave the one I’m with
To be with the one I love
I feel as though I’m lying
To him and to myself
God I wish I knew the answer
I just need some help
But I know I need
To make this decision on my own
But I’m just so afraid
That I’ll decide wrong
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Have or Love?

Contributed by CrimsonTears on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 01:51:34 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

What do u do when the one you love
Isn’t the one your with
I love him but he’s not with me
He loves me but I don’t love him
I know this sounds confusing
But if you only knew
The pain that this has caused me
It’s eating me alive
So now I’m left alone to think
I don’t know what to do
Should I leave the one I’m with
To be with the one I love
I feel as though I’m lying
To him and to myself
God I wish I knew the answer
I just need some help
But I know I need
To make this decision on my own
But I’m just so afraid
That I’ll decide wrong

Copyright Â© CrimsonTears ... [ 2004-07-20 13:51:34]
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Re: Have or Love? (User Rating: 1 )
by emeraldeyes on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 02:32:57 PM AEST
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this is a very good poem about love and confusion...good job...on the help side of it...I know from experience that if one person isn't happy in a relationship, noone will be. There will eventually be too much tension & questions, regrets & wishes, all sorts of things. I think you'd end up splitting up and quite honestly, why keep wasting time?? I know it's hard to let go sometimes, but sometimes it's the ONLY way to find happiness...for everyone involved...i'll quit preaching now. keep writing.

Re: Have or Love? (User Rating: 1 )
by Heartfilledblood on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 03:34:45 AM AEST
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You should follow your heart. What makes you more happy should be your ultimate decision. Dont keep yourself bound to anything that your not emotionally attached too. If you love someone else be with him he will make you more happy than anyone else.
Very good poem I liked it a lot.

Heartfilledblood

Re: Have or Love? (User Rating: 1 )
by TwistedCage on Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 05:49:39 PM AEST
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The last stanza needs a little work, but I liked it overall...

Cage

Re: Have or Love? (User Rating: 1 )
by PieceOfABrokenSoul on Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 09:46:02 PM AEST
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This I realy like, it's how I'd imagine my ex felt when she was going out with both I and another guy named Mike

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