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Unbearable Suicide
Contributed by
WorthlesSanity666
on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 11:46:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Out of limits I
shiver and shake,
my eyes rolling around
in my head.
Too much pain,
not enough blood.
In unendurable anxiety
I don't fit inside my skin.
My mind screams,
as I stumble and fall.
I tremor on the ground,
like a helpless child.
The depression has consumed as I
reach for the knife sitting
on the counter.
I scutter into a corner
and stab the blade
into my wrist,
and start to drag.
Again and again,
the blade licks my
waterways of life.
The blood spills,
quickly dripping to the floor.
I rest my head against the wall.
I look up to the ceiling
with tear filled eyes.
I pray to God
to save my soul,
and that I'll
see him soon.
My head goes limp
as I sit in a pool of
burgundy depression.
Copyright ©
WorthlesSanity666
... [
2004-07-20 11:46:42]
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Re: Unbearable Suicide
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 11:56:23 AM AEST
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i know how yoi feel hunni... great expression of hurt and pain......
pixie xx |
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Re: Unbearable Suicide
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by deathdrop on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 12:19:52 PM AEST
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a dark poem!
very well written.
please don't go just yet!
many of us on this website care about you! |
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Re: Unbearable Suicide
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by brokensoul on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 01:51:36 PM AEST
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great poem
very dark
ahaha i like it hehe |
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Re: Unbearable Suicide
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by Babigurl on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 08:45:58 PM AEST
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| What a wonderful poem I love the way you write..your emotions just pour out ...this poem I can relate too |
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Re: Unbearable Suicide
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by grip-wth-broken-fingers on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 11:01:40 AM AEST
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| nice poem deep words i like it its good thank you :P -grip- |
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Re: Unbearable Suicide
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by TwEeK on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 07:26:49 PM AEST
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omg, beautifully written
loved it so much!
..burgundy depression.....what a way to finish!
Tweek |
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