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So This Is Goodbye
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 11:22:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
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So this is my last Goodbye,
I know you don’t care if I die,
Lat night you sat & watched me weep,
I needed to talk, you went to sleep.
Mark I really do love you,
It’s not enough to stop me feeling blue,
I am awash with floods of tears,
Badly wounded by all my fears.
You will never understand,
How it is to walk alone in the land,
Feeling desperate & suicidal,
Can’t take any more of this hell.
Sometimes getting out of bed is hard,
I feel very ill, unstable & scarred,
Don’t see the point in continuing to live,
I have nothing at all left to give.
You destroyed me last night,
Telling me you didn’t want me in your sight,
That you wanted to end our relationship,
Now thoughts of suicide have a grip.
My soul feels so broken,
After your words had been spoken,
You smashed my heart in a billion pieces,
Watched me as deep pain releases.
My medication looks tempting,
I wonder what it’d look like empty,
Would you care if I took the lot?,
My answer to that is I think not.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-07-20 11:22:53]
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Re: So This Is Goodbye
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by deathdrop on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 11:41:42 AM AEST
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mark might not care but i do!!!!!
please never forget that pixie.
don't let him win.
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Re: So This Is Goodbye
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 12:02:26 PM AEST
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awww krissie, if he is like this you would be better without him, it would be his loss, but feelings are never wrong, facts are, and hopefully these are feelings, this is such a human poem, so heartfelt, i am crying, your poetry and you are a true gift to the world, you are much loved by many, leave the bottle full babe, tomorrow will be brighter,
big hugs and big love nessa
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Re: So This Is Goodbye
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by fastpitchqt on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 01:50:20 PM AEST
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| no guy should make you feel like this. I speak from experience. I cant say forget about him and move on, because I would be a hypocrite because I have not forgot about my ex and moved on. I am still so much in love with him even afte rme hurt me so badly. But with time things will get better, with time the heart will heal and love again. Good luck with that, hopefully we will both get over our heartbreaks. |
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Re: So This Is Goodbye
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by brokensoul on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 01:57:10 PM AEST
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| you shouldnt have to take this from guys i have had to alot and i finally said to hell with them |
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Re: So This Is Goodbye
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by hrpuffnstuff on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 05:45:50 AM AEST
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aw krissy, i feel so gutted for you. you have come along way in the last few months. I understand how you feel , be strong, take a day at a time matey
lots of love
hayley xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx |
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