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I will wait; will you?
Contributed by
Mihiri
on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 10:15:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Everyday I wait for you as everyday I wait,
You walk not past my garden; you wait not by the gate,
Everyday I search for you as everyday I cry,
You see me not when I see you, you swiftly pass me by
The sun shines not when your face turns away,
The birds sing not when your lips halt your say,
Each moment I wait for you as each moment I sigh,
Will you stay back for me and look me straight in the eye?
Even now I wait for you as at present I blindly hope,
You’re the reason, why with this life I assiduously cope,
On the morrow I’ll wait for you, on the morrow I shall pray,
That you near me with every step you take each endless day
Copyright ©
Mihiri
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2004-07-20 10:15:38] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I will wait; will you?
(User Rating: 1 ) by CodyJ on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 10:40:10 AM AEST (User
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That strikes eerily close to home. I like yourstyle and diction. kudos |
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Re: I will wait; will you?
(User Rating: 1 ) by fairietears on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 01:05:21 PM AEST (User
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That was fabulous! touching! |
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Re: I will wait; will you?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Thivanka on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 01:08:27 AM AEST (User
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Hmmm....now who's this 'one' you're talking about? I wonder.....
Well anyway, well written poem. Liked it, short n' sweet.
-Thivanka |
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