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I know that you’re hiding that thing that you do
And I know I don’t understand all you’ve been thru
But I know that you need to reach out to someone
Before all the damage you’re doing can’t be undone

I really do think you’re feeling trapped away
And you can’t see the light because of all of the grey
Got to find help on how to break out of the dark
Because there is the rest of your life waiting for you to embark

Don’t bury your head deeper into the sand
It’s times like these we need to be strong and make a stand
Show the world that you are a force to be reckoned with
And you might find all your troubles disappear into the mist

It all sounds too easy – I understand what you mean
But opening old wounds won’t bleed your life clean
Take a step up and you can lean on me
And I’ll walk with you, help you and you can learn to be free

MW 20.07.04
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I know you

Contributed by evilfairy on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 01:54:15 AM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous

I know that you’re hiding that thing that you do
And I know I don’t understand all you’ve been thru
But I know that you need to reach out to someone
Before all the damage you’re doing can’t be undone

I really do think you’re feeling trapped away
And you can’t see the light because of all of the grey
Got to find help on how to break out of the dark
Because there is the rest of your life waiting for you to embark

Don’t bury your head deeper into the sand
It’s times like these we need to be strong and make a stand
Show the world that you are a force to be reckoned with
And you might find all your troubles disappear into the mist

It all sounds too easy – I understand what you mean
But opening old wounds won’t bleed your life clean
Take a step up and you can lean on me
And I’ll walk with you, help you and you can learn to be free

MW 20.07.04

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Re: I know you (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 04:31:53 AM AEST
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a heart-wreching poem. you are a kind person. good luck for the furture.
i'm an ex-cutter, and if any one like you had been there for me in the past, then i proberly wouuld have given up faster... let the angels be with you!

Re: I know you (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 04:31:57 AM AEST
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a heart-wreching poem. you are a kind person. good luck for the furture.
i'm an ex-cutter, and if any one like you had been there for me in the past, then i proberly wouuld have given up faster... let the angels be with you!

Re: I know you (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 06:13:15 AM AEST
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awwww this is so precious and sad, I used to cut mysel and stopped after 8-9 years, your friend is lucky to have you, you are sch a sweetie *hugs to you both* I truly hope that your friend can overcome this, I am sure she will woth you by her side..

pixie xx

Re: I know you (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 10:48:12 PM AEST
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I'm not a cutter so I cant relate but your words spoke to me, explaining the emotions within you.
Your friend is lucky to have you by her side.
Good write.

Re: I know you (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 01:20:20 PM AEST
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A wonderfully supportive piece, full of pain but uplifting at the end. Good write.

Naz ~

Re: I know you (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 06:02:49 AM AEST
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Sad but written well. God bless u for taking time out to let them know someone truly cares.
Luv, huggs, faith,
emy

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