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Array ( [sid] => 56852 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mr. Rite [time] => 2004-07-19 22:16:14 [hometext] => i wrote this when me and my boyfriend were about to break up [bodytext] => star light
star bright
where is mr. rite????
you'd have spikey hair
and always care
you'll have blue eyes
and would never make me cry
if we would fight
you would call the same nite
and say u were wrong
it wouldnt be long
before we would talk again
but this isnt the deal
this guy aint even real
i made this up in my mind
and now i have to leave this behind
never to find mr. rite [comments] => 3 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 22 [informant] => punkprincess6689 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Mr. Rite

Contributed by punkprincess6689 on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 10:16:14 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

star light
star bright
where is mr. rite????
you'd have spikey hair
and always care
you'll have blue eyes
and would never make me cry
if we would fight
you would call the same nite
and say u were wrong
it wouldnt be long
before we would talk again
but this isnt the deal
this guy aint even real
i made this up in my mind
and now i have to leave this behind
never to find mr. rite

Copyright © punkprincess6689 ... [ 2004-07-19 22:16:14]
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Re: Mr. Rite (User Rating: 1 )
by emeraldeyes on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 10:55:54 PM AEST
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ah-I don't believe this at all! You just haven't met him yet!! Keep writing, girl!

Re: Mr. Rite (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 12:51:04 AM AEST
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awww you will someday, this poem is wonderfully written and so heartfelt, hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Mr. Rite (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 09:38:45 PM AEST
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Kim You'll Met Him One Day. You're Still Young. Keep Writing

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