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I can't see the person
Who I thought I knew
I can't see through
The lies I hold true
I can't see you
I lost you

This is my dying affection
For everything
The world ever offered me
Nothing but pain and misery

This is my dying affection
For everything
You ever did offer me
Nothing but pain and misery

This is the ending
Of everything
You killed what was inside
All the feelings that reside
You killed me every time
That you told me a lie
Take this dying affection
It's killing me inside

My affection died
As I saw through the lies
My affection died
When I saw who you were
Someone killing me inside [comments] => 3 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Essentially9 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Dying Affection

Contributed by Essentially9 on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 10:03:19 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Dying Affection

I can't see the person
Who I thought I knew
I can't see through
The lies I hold true
I can't see you
I lost you

This is my dying affection
For everything
The world ever offered me
Nothing but pain and misery

This is my dying affection
For everything
You ever did offer me
Nothing but pain and misery

This is the ending
Of everything
You killed what was inside
All the feelings that reside
You killed me every time
That you told me a lie
Take this dying affection
It's killing me inside

My affection died
As I saw through the lies
My affection died
When I saw who you were
Someone killing me inside

Copyright © Essentially9 ... [ 2004-07-19 22:03:19]
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Re: Dying Affection (User Rating: 1 )
by KurdtBeantheWIKKED on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 10:09:39 PM AEST
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Wow, whoever they are
they are defenetly not worth all this pain

I loved it, great write

Re: Dying Affection (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 12:45:23 AM AEST
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This is really good...reminds me of how my bf feels about his life b4 me...great job

please comment on my work too
Summer

Re: Dying Affection (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 07:42:36 PM AEST
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Do you know of dying affection Jennifer..Perhaps it is the death if it that makes it better..Another piece to add to the group of perfection you always seem to post..

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