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Trickled heartbeats faster than water faucet
Leaking
Drained by sunlight bursting open the sky
All bets are off
It was meant to be love
Nothing more – nothing less
Disguised and sly
He walked tall
Scanned the room
And picked a new one
Flashy red lips
Chrome knees made promises
Soft leather upholstery
Kissed him
Made him smile with pride
Baby give me one more ride
In that 57 Chevy

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57 Chevy

Contributed by merry on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 08:03:00 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

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Trickled heartbeats faster than water faucet
Leaking
Drained by sunlight bursting open the sky
All bets are off
It was meant to be love
Nothing more – nothing less
Disguised and sly
He walked tall
Scanned the room
And picked a new one
Flashy red lips
Chrome knees made promises
Soft leather upholstery
Kissed him
Made him smile with pride
Baby give me one more ride
In that 57 Chevy

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Re: 57 Chevy (User Rating: 1 )
by Dusty on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 08:25:04 PM AEST
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Sweet! I'm so glad to see some vehicle poetry. That's just cool.
~Dusty~

Re: 57 Chevy (User Rating: 1 )
by pvd on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 09:07:19 PM AEST
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I like your style.
"Chrome knees made promises"
Great line.
Keep writing on this train of thought.

Re: 57 Chevy (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 09:23:02 PM AEST
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You follow my husbands heart! He owns a 72 buick skylark that hes redoing! We did have a 69 Mustang! So I know what this is like! Christina

Re: 57 Chevy (User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 10:34:22 PM AEST
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I really appreciated reading this piece.I,as well,love your style ! It's original and creates such vivid images.Wonderfully written,I am one pleased reader =)
PumpkinPie

Re: 57 Chevy (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 01:15:36 AM AEST
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oh sweet! i have that black chevy malibu in the pasture and mara and i are trying to save money to get it back on the road again lol, love this sis, hugs n' love nessa

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Re: 57 Chevy (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 06:40:26 PM AEST
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We have so many pretty babies---
a 1940 Oldsmobile
a 1965 Mustang
a 1982 Mercedes
a 1988 Cabriolet
When you LOVE cars, it never ends. I love this poem. My hubby will, too.
Stitch

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