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Array ( [sid] => 56771 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => emotionless [time] => 2004-07-19 13:14:31 [hometext] => (please read)....when you cant feel and the only way to express what you WANT to feel is on a blank screen...its that wich destroys me... [bodytext] => i lay on the soft earth
the dirt clumped to my feet
the soil perfumed around my body
the grass a cover
the flowers a pillow
my head so soft
i dont crush them
they cry for me
because i cannot
the moon shines down
the misty night
the star light dances
and the fairys sing out in agony just for me
my eyes dry and dont blink
my heart stone
my soul ice
my head empty
no thoughts
no feelings
i sit up and i prick myself on a stone
my blood isnt red
its blue
dead and lifeless
it drips slowly out my vein
i dont bother to ease the flow
the stains are individual
mistakes in my life
the blood
rain
dirt
smuthered over my body
i lay back down
and stare up feeling useless
no-one to comfort
no-one to comfort me
i lay awake
and dream of love
never have felt this feeling before
its like not knowing what a kiss feels like
but when you experience it
u'll never forget
...well i'll never remember and there is nothing to forget
and i stare at the sky
hoping and wishing it would collapse and suffocate me
but all i do
is lay emotionless on the ground [comments] => 2 [counter] => 182 [topic] => 39 [informant] => Hannah_Heaven [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
emotionless

Contributed by Hannah_Heaven on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 01:14:31 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief



i lay on the soft earth
the dirt clumped to my feet
the soil perfumed around my body
the grass a cover
the flowers a pillow
my head so soft
i dont crush them
they cry for me
because i cannot
the moon shines down
the misty night
the star light dances
and the fairys sing out in agony just for me
my eyes dry and dont blink
my heart stone
my soul ice
my head empty
no thoughts
no feelings
i sit up and i prick myself on a stone
my blood isnt red
its blue
dead and lifeless
it drips slowly out my vein
i dont bother to ease the flow
the stains are individual
mistakes in my life
the blood
rain
dirt
smuthered over my body
i lay back down
and stare up feeling useless
no-one to comfort
no-one to comfort me
i lay awake
and dream of love
never have felt this feeling before
its like not knowing what a kiss feels like
but when you experience it
u'll never forget
...well i'll never remember and there is nothing to forget
and i stare at the sky
hoping and wishing it would collapse and suffocate me
but all i do
is lay emotionless on the ground




Copyright © Hannah_Heaven ... [ 2004-07-19 13:14:31]
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Re: emotionless (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 01:24:15 PM AEST
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sorry you feel like this *hugs you*
great poem tho...

pixie xx


Re: emotionless (User Rating: 1 )
by brokensoul on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 01:27:46 PM AEST
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wow it was like those words were being purred out of me instead of u whats your name??




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