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unusual
what would they say?
they would fear i was sliping away
they would hold on tighter
i am slipping through their grip like sand
but i am so confused
i find myself writing this word in poem after poem, song after song
confused
these newly identified emotions
float around in my mind
crazy
i know
what is happening to me
i am losing sight of myself
falling into a great abyss
i look upon my past
and wonder how could that be me?
it cant be me
it isnt me
i dont even know who i am
to much time
to much to think about
i am screaming
i take a deep breath
i am insane
someone please
please save me [comments] => 3 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 48 [informant] => brokensoul [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Inside my Head

Contributed by brokensoul on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 12:50:17 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

i have never had such unfamiliar feelings before
unusual
what would they say?
they would fear i was sliping away
they would hold on tighter
i am slipping through their grip like sand
but i am so confused
i find myself writing this word in poem after poem, song after song
confused
these newly identified emotions
float around in my mind
crazy
i know
what is happening to me
i am losing sight of myself
falling into a great abyss
i look upon my past
and wonder how could that be me?
it cant be me
it isnt me
i dont even know who i am
to much time
to much to think about
i am screaming
i take a deep breath
i am insane
someone please
please save me

Copyright © brokensoul ... [ 2004-07-19 12:50:17]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Inside my Head (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 12:54:47 PM AEST
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Awwww keeping something like that inside must have been hard.. *hugs you* thanks for being brave and sharing this amazing poem,

pixie xx

Re: Inside my Head (User Rating: 1 )
by kammie on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 01:03:48 PM AEST
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wow how did you manage to keep it to your self that long i mean we all have to except what we are iv just had to except that martin doesnt want me but it took a while for my head to come around so i gess i understand a bit

Re: Inside my Head (User Rating: 1 )
by Stoney1 on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 02:21:12 PM AEST
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To thine own self be true

Don't know who said it, but it's certainly true here.
Don't rack yourself with guilt about how you feel.
Accept yourself and good, fair-minded people will,
accept you.

To Hell with the rest.

Stoney

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