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Pressing on Bruises

Contributed by iluvpencils on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 11:55:23 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



You pressed on my bruises
Poured salt on my open wounds
Duf into my scars
Stomped on my broken toes
Now God only knows
How much you've helped me

You confused me so much
I thought I'd lost touch with all reality
But it took me this long to see
How strong I'be come to be

You pressed on my bruises
Were nothing but salt on a cut
You reopened scars

All because of you I'm so battered now
And I know how cliche this sounds
But you'be made me so much stronger now

You pressed on my bruises
Were nothing but salt on a cut
You reopened all my scars

And now every night I press on my bruises
I know I've found a little truth in
Where I got them
Places I'be been
Sights I've seen
They're all a part of me
You're still a part of me
No matter how painful it may be
I want to make that part last

You pressed on my bruises
Were nothing but salt on a cut
You reopened all my scars

So even though I hate you
And al the stupid things that you do
I guess I'm saying thank you
I'm so much stronger now
And you know that it's true




Copyright © iluvpencils ... [ 2004-07-19 11:55:23]
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Re: Pressing on Bruises (User Rating: 1 )
by kammie on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 12:17:00 PM AEST
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it woz soooo true i mean everyone has a wound that needs pressin to make you see stuff it was great
kammie xx


Re: Pressing on Bruises (User Rating: 1 )
by brokensoul on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 12:59:56 PM AEST
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great sometimes the most meaningful relationships can turn to sh*t but we just learn the next time thats what everyone says right ????? i wish i could be stronger like others stronger like you but i am to afreaid to go through any more loves great write maybe i can use this for inspiration to get back on my feet relationship wise


Re: Pressing on Bruises (User Rating: 1 )
by 01_zanzebar on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 03:03:18 PM AEST
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indeed, i wish a lass i knew would do the same, but then again, we went our separate ways for ever now :'(
i love how you said it was a cliché, gave it a sensible touch

well done

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Re: Pressing on Bruises (User Rating: 1 )
by Tanmaya on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 02:43:55 AM AEST
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That's good stuff.
Simple but true.




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