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Array ( [sid] => 56749 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Pain In The !!!! [time] => 2004-07-19 10:41:32 [hometext] => *kicks life* ............. [bodytext] => Life is such a pain in the arse,
Makes me laugh it’s such a farce,
It kicks you when you feel weak,
Knocking you from your high peak.

I feel like throwing in the towel,
When things get me down & I feel foul,
But then I think No, I’m not letting you win,
Even when my patience has worn so thin.

Sometimes I feel as weak as a kitten,
When I am wounded & have been bitten,
But then I can feel so very strong,
On the days when nothing seems to go wrong.

Things have gotten to me over time,
Sadness has carried out it’s crime,
Now I am left feeling defeated,
My determination has been seated.

What doesn’t kill you makes you stronger,
Don’t know if I can go on any longer,
It’s not for the lack of constantly trying,
Feels like my heart is always crying.

Thank God for my stubbornness & will,
Of life I have not yet had my fill,
Things build up like bricks in a wall,
Someone please catch me when I fall?

Self doubt, insecurities & pain,
Are all making me feel the strain,
I long for them to leave me alone,
Not to be there when I pick up the phone.
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Pain In The !!!!

Contributed by pixie on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 10:41:32 AM in AEST
Topic: hbadday

Life is such a pain in the arse,
Makes me laugh it’s such a farce,
It kicks you when you feel weak,
Knocking you from your high peak.

I feel like throwing in the towel,
When things get me down & I feel foul,
But then I think No, I’m not letting you win,
Even when my patience has worn so thin.

Sometimes I feel as weak as a kitten,
When I am wounded & have been bitten,
But then I can feel so very strong,
On the days when nothing seems to go wrong.

Things have gotten to me over time,
Sadness has carried out it’s crime,
Now I am left feeling defeated,
My determination has been seated.

What doesn’t kill you makes you stronger,
Don’t know if I can go on any longer,
It’s not for the lack of constantly trying,
Feels like my heart is always crying.

Thank God for my stubbornness & will,
Of life I have not yet had my fill,
Things build up like bricks in a wall,
Someone please catch me when I fall?

Self doubt, insecurities & pain,
Are all making me feel the strain,
I long for them to leave me alone,
Not to be there when I pick up the phone.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2004-07-19 10:41:32]
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Re: Pain In The !!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by Monkeybones99 on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 11:48:11 AM AEST
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Great write keep up the good work.

Re: Pain In The !!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 01:46:04 PM AEST
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isn't it always like that though, when we are down its like everyone and everything has radar, lotsa extra big hugs, hang in there, you know where i am:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Pain In The !!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 10:32:18 PM AEST
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excellent write well presented. so true and emotion.

Re: Pain In The !!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 01:29:01 AM AEST
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this is an awsome write.

Re: Pain In The !!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by lovesucks on Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 11:30:38 PM AEST
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all this is all a pain in the......um head usually but you can't save your a** and your face at the same time right???? You'll be alright you have strong will. Lots of love all around

Theresa

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