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Array ( [sid] => 56748 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Simple Dreams (pleaz comment) [time] => 2004-07-19 10:37:25 [hometext] => i wrote this after i had a dream about me being happy [bodytext] => I'm happy
I'm care free
I don't wanna die
My mommy loves me
We don't fight
Our house isn't World War 3
My daddy loves me
He doesn't hate me anymore and he's there for me when I need him
He doesn't do drugs and doesn't drink
My world is perfect and serene
I could never wish for anything more
But I wish this wasn't a lie that it was my life
But it's not reality it's just one of my
Simple Dreams [comments] => 3 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 32 [informant] => IncoherentGirl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Simple Dreams (pleaz comment)

Contributed by IncoherentGirl on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 10:37:25 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



I'm happy
I'm care free
I don't wanna die
My mommy loves me
We don't fight
Our house isn't World War 3
My daddy loves me
He doesn't hate me anymore and he's there for me when I need him
He doesn't do drugs and doesn't drink
My world is perfect and serene
I could never wish for anything more
But I wish this wasn't a lie that it was my life
But it's not reality it's just one of my
Simple Dreams




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Re: Simple Dreams (pleaz comment) (User Rating: 1 )
by Monkeybones99 on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 11:22:12 AM AEST
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I think this is a good poem it kind of reminds me of my years growing up with a dad addicted to drugs and at times very volient.


Re: Simple Dreams (pleaz comment) (User Rating: 1 )
by brokensoul on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 01:18:07 PM AEST
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dreams can be so amazing but as you wake the dissapointment of realizing it was only a dream is madding emotinal write im sorry but hang in there hun all good things must come to an end but but all bad things must end to


Re: Simple Dreams (pleaz comment) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 03:02:53 PM AEST
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I wrote a poem like this the other day, although of course, we're under totally different circumstances.

Here's hoping one of your simple dreams comes true one day.

Keep writing.




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