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Sick of it
Contributed by
loopylou
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Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 08:44:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You make me the angriest I’ve ever been
when you walk in the room
and just start expecting miracles from me
I’m not going to be her
I’m not her substerchaut
so stop making me do things I don’t want to do!
I’m sick of you comparing
I’m sick of you staring
this is my life and ill be
whoever I want to be!
with or without your approval
I’m sick of your negativity
What’s it going to take to make you happy
its not just you who's found life tuff
so why are you the one screaming I’ve had enough
would a smile really hurt?
would it really make you feel worse?
I guess ill just do much
you can say I’m mean
but trust me this is written out of love
don’t look down on me
because your not all that tall!
don’t you walk
and make me crawl
I’ve had enough of your opinions
because you and them don’t mean jack!
I think for people like you
being born was just a little mishap
your too clever
to devious
and its annoying
me just a little to much!
my very worst nightmare is giving you my trust!
your worse as a friend then a enemy
and I speak for all
when I say you've hurt way to many
Copyright ©
loopylou
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2004-07-19 08:44:29] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Sick of it
(User Rating: 1 ) by Monkeybones99 on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 11:52:46 AM AEST (User
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Ok I'm going to be both postive and negative I loved the poem the meaning and it was easy to read but on the other hand you need to work on your spelling because if a person has to try to figure out what the word is suppose to be it makes it alittle harder to read but I'm not trying to dis I have trouble spelling myself so I look words up before I post a poem.Just a thought keep up the good work. |
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Re: Sick of it
(User Rating: 1 ) by iluvpencils on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 05:25:26 PM AEST (User
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I love those lines:
I’m sick of you comparing
I’m sick of you staring
this is my life and ill be
whoever I want to be!
with or without your approval
I liked your way of getting your anger out. Thank you
-Claire |
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