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I tired
Contributed by
clowns_can_burn
on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 03:10:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I tired
to be the best
to excell in everything i did
how is that everything became a mess?
I tired
why wasn't that good enough?
why is it that you think that all i do is lie?
I tired
to be me
and i failed
maybe now you and everyone else can see
I tired
I failed because you wouldn't except me either way
no matter how great i was or became
And now i finally have somthing to say
I tired
Only to please you
But no matter what i do
i will never be good enough
I tired
and thats all that should matter to you
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2004-07-19 03:10:29]
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Re: I tired
(User Rating: 1 )
by arden on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 10:39:19 PM AEST
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this was very emotional, very sad write.
i liked the flow of the poem.
i really liked this poem alot. you did such an amazing job.
Arden
P.s. loved your screen name lol |
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Re: I tired
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by Broken_Skin on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 03:21:28 PM AEST
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quite a few spelling mistakes, but never mind that =}
Trying is not good enough for some
thing is, you should never stop trying
'i tried'
you say, that should be im trying =)
Keep trying |
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