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Array ( [sid] => 56652 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => IF I STAINED YOU I’M SORRY. [time] => 2004-07-18 15:50:06 [hometext] => Another for the security guard. I can’t see him reading it some how, but still… I thought I deserves a place up here. If you don't read it i don't care, but if you do please comment. [bodytext] => You looked so teary eyed.
I wanted to reach out and hug you.
You said you thought I was safe from myself
I felt like a disappointment to you.

Sure you barely know me.
But it feels like we’ve met before.
I don’t know why I’ve got that feeling!
But makes me feel so raw.

I don’t know why I like you
I guess it’s because you care.
I know that I hurt you!
That’s why I want to disappear.

I can’t begin to think of how much I must stain you.
But please don’t think I do it just because I feel like it…
You moved on and walked away from me.
That’s why I felt like *****!

Then, today, you did the same thing!
That’s why I just gave up.
I wanted to say sorry,
But when I turned you’d just walked off!

Before that I spoke to you.
While I was being held and hand cuffed by the police,
You kept your head down while I shouted at you.
As I stood I felt my self break.

I was shouting because I was breaking inside!
I was saying the truth, not spitting out lies!
People don’t help me, they leave me to rot.
I know you care for me, but it’s not enough!
When you go in a cell you’re treated like your cracked!
There was no sweet stuff; I promise you I was smacked!
But hey, it’s the twisted girl’s, word against the coppers,
So who would you trust, ME or the OTHERS?
I don’t make big things, I can’t see the use.
Bottom line, is that I’m the broken fuse.
So think what you like, I’ve only heard it all before!
I’m sorry if I stain you, but I still feel so sore!!!

I’m haunted because I see you,
Some places that I go.
I’M A MUCKED UP LITTLE FREAK!
Yeah, I know…

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IF I STAINED YOU I’M SORRY.

Contributed by deathdrop on Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 03:50:06 PM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry



You looked so teary eyed.
I wanted to reach out and hug you.
You said you thought I was safe from myself
I felt like a disappointment to you.

Sure you barely know me.
But it feels like we’ve met before.
I don’t know why I’ve got that feeling!
But makes me feel so raw.

I don’t know why I like you
I guess it’s because you care.
I know that I hurt you!
That’s why I want to disappear.

I can’t begin to think of how much I must stain you.
But please don’t think I do it just because I feel like it…
You moved on and walked away from me.
That’s why I felt like *****!

Then, today, you did the same thing!
That’s why I just gave up.
I wanted to say sorry,
But when I turned you’d just walked off!

Before that I spoke to you.
While I was being held and hand cuffed by the police,
You kept your head down while I shouted at you.
As I stood I felt my self break.

I was shouting because I was breaking inside!
I was saying the truth, not spitting out lies!
People don’t help me, they leave me to rot.
I know you care for me, but it’s not enough!
When you go in a cell you’re treated like your cracked!
There was no sweet stuff; I promise you I was smacked!
But hey, it’s the twisted girl’s, word against the coppers,
So who would you trust, ME or the OTHERS?
I don’t make big things, I can’t see the use.
Bottom line, is that I’m the broken fuse.
So think what you like, I’ve only heard it all before!
I’m sorry if I stain you, but I still feel so sore!!!

I’m haunted because I see you,
Some places that I go.
I’M A MUCKED UP LITTLE FREAK!
Yeah, I know…





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Re: IF I STAINED YOU I’M SORRY. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 04:20:13 PM AEST
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I was intrigued, and you asked . . .

'Disturbing' doesn't quite cut it as a descriptor.

"I can’t begin to think of how much I must stain you.
But please don’t think I do it just because I feel like it…"

Keep writing, as I hope it helps . . .


Re: IF I STAINED YOU I’M SORRY. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 05:55:19 PM AEST
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Strange and unfamiliar world to me... But well expressed.


Re: IF I STAINED YOU I’M SORRY. (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 07:27:47 PM AEST
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the title is ingenious, the write is entertaining but like Timebot, a totally unfamiliar world to me... still... a good write/




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