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Array ( [sid] => 56632 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Please Don't Leave Me [time] => 2004-07-18 12:33:27 [hometext] => I just found out my mom is dying from cancer. Wrote this off the top of my head. [bodytext] => Drowning beneath an ocean of a thousand cries
Buried beneath a thousand thoughts of guilt
I know I have tight grip of your hand, don’t let go
Frustrated emotions, Because I know its not your choice
How I’m afraid that some day I may loose your voice
Just another familiar scent that I can’t define
Memories have only seemed to turn into unreal illusions
How I used to think that it was so hard to cry
Overwhelmed with guilt, Please don’t leave me
Too much remorse has built up, I need to scream
It would feel so much better if I couldn’t feel at all
How it would feel so much better if I couldn’t feel at all [comments] => 7 [counter] => 258 [topic] => 32 [informant] => coaster [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Please Don't Leave Me

Contributed by coaster on Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 12:33:27 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Drowning beneath an ocean of a thousand cries
Buried beneath a thousand thoughts of guilt
I know I have tight grip of your hand, don’t let go
Frustrated emotions, Because I know its not your choice
How I’m afraid that some day I may loose your voice
Just another familiar scent that I can’t define
Memories have only seemed to turn into unreal illusions
How I used to think that it was so hard to cry
Overwhelmed with guilt, Please don’t leave me
Too much remorse has built up, I need to scream
It would feel so much better if I couldn’t feel at all
How it would feel so much better if I couldn’t feel at all




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Re: Please Don't Leave Me (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 12:35:51 PM AEST
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OMG this is awful, I am so sorry *hugs you* if you need to talk... you know where I am , very emotional write, brought a tear to my eye...

pixie xx


Re: Please Don't Leave Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 12:41:16 PM AEST
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*Tears*....
Jenni


Re: Please Don't Leave Me (User Rating: 1 )
by RhythmBndt on Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 02:18:46 PM AEST
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:'( *HUG* I'll have you & your mom in my prays. Beautiful write.


Re: Please Don't Leave Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Hannah_jeannie_Brazeau on Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 03:05:34 PM AEST
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I know how I'd feel in your shoes, but the closest I've been was losing my grandmother last year. I tried to force myself to be strong, but it didn't work. It's difficult to let go, but it doesn't hurt forever. this touched me deep inside where I thought all the emotions were dead.

Great job.


Re: Please Don't Leave Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 08:52:54 PM AEST
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I am so very sorry for your distress and pain. My heart is with you.

Rita


Re: Please Don't Leave Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 06:24:21 AM AEST
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Great expression - I just found out my dad has cancer, so I understand exactly where you are coming from, and thought his was well done.


Re: Please Don't Leave Me (User Rating: 1 )
by b_rand on Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 10:26:38 PM AEST
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This is incredibly powerful. I'm shocked at how well this was written. Great job!




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