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Sat upon the rocking chair,
Smiling & laughing at me,
Mummy she’s pretty why can’t you see.

I play with her every night,
She holds onto my hand so tight,
Tell me that her world is so dark,
On her head she bears a mark.

It looks like it has burnt to her skin,
She told me that Satan is her kin,
But Mommy isn’t he very bad,
She loves him as he is her Dad.

She tries to lead me by the hand,
Deep down into her Daddy’s land,
Her eyes are filled with black,
She promised me I can come back.

But I don’t believe what she says,
As I have seen her evil ways,
I saw her kill the boy next door,
She left his dead body on the floor.

I hid behind the curtain,
But she saw me I know for certain,
As the very next day she came in my room,
Filling me with fear & doom.

I am so frightened of what she’ll do,
Mummy can I come & sleep with you,
Will you protect me from the little girl,
Who tries to take me into her dark world.

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Devil's Daughter

Contributed by pixie on Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 10:40:31 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Can you see she’s over there,
Sat upon the rocking chair,
Smiling & laughing at me,
Mummy she’s pretty why can’t you see.

I play with her every night,
She holds onto my hand so tight,
Tell me that her world is so dark,
On her head she bears a mark.

It looks like it has burnt to her skin,
She told me that Satan is her kin,
But Mommy isn’t he very bad,
She loves him as he is her Dad.

She tries to lead me by the hand,
Deep down into her Daddy’s land,
Her eyes are filled with black,
She promised me I can come back.

But I don’t believe what she says,
As I have seen her evil ways,
I saw her kill the boy next door,
She left his dead body on the floor.

I hid behind the curtain,
But she saw me I know for certain,
As the very next day she came in my room,
Filling me with fear & doom.

I am so frightened of what she’ll do,
Mummy can I come & sleep with you,
Will you protect me from the little girl,
Who tries to take me into her dark world.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2004-07-18 10:40:31]
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Re: Devil's Daughter (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 10:46:24 AM AEST
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*gets chills down her spine*
Wow girl,
making with the dark much?
lol.
This is great, i love it.
Kinda scary too. lol
Great write.
Phil

Re: Devil's Daughter (User Rating: 1 )
by hrpuffnstuff on Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 11:19:00 AM AEST
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krissy that was great fun
love hxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Re: Devil's Daughter (User Rating: 1 )
by darkfairy1188 on Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 11:42:19 AM AEST
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this is a really cool poem. good job ;)

~Sara

Re: Devil's Daughter (User Rating: 1 )
by carmen_queasy on Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 11:55:43 AM AEST
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That was great. Very imaginative.

Re: Devil's Daughter (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 01:11:39 PM AEST
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WOW love this poem much! hun this is an excellent write, so many images! just love it so much!

Re: Devil's Daughter (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 01:32:43 PM AEST
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hauntingly brilliant:)

hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-

Re: Devil's Daughter (User Rating: 1 )
by TheVoice on Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 01:53:24 PM AEST
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Powerful Gripping write! My hat's off to you. This is very good.

The Voice

Re: Devil's Daughter (User Rating: 1 )
by Dawny on Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 06:08:25 PM AEST
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Powerful, dark and gripping...amazing imagery, I really like this scary poem

Love Dawny x

Re: Devil's Daughter (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 02:04:34 AM AEST
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Oooh..frightened??..nah..I am here my dear..
Sleep in peace my little girl... venkat

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