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[sid] => 56602
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => If you had the chance...
[time] => 2004-07-18 03:17:49
[hometext] => Sorry boys and girls I am seriously struggling with my poetry skills at the moment I'm just searching for the perfect poems and i dont seem to be writing them. But other than that check this out and comment on this please, honestly
[bodytext] => If you had the chance would you love me? Cos my love for you is strong, I’d give you the world and my life, Even if the choice was wrong, If you had the chance would you kiss me? Kisses aren’t something you sell, And I wouldn’t say we’d done it, I’d never kiss and tell, If you had the chance would you call me? It could just make my day, Make me feel like nothing was wrong, No matter what you’d say, If you had the chance would you come home? And see what leaving had done, The deepest depression had come over me, Now slitting my wrist was fun, If you had the chance would you save me? From the scar's you create, A lustful pleasure when blood drips down, Was nothing but my fate, If you had the chance would you kill me? Can’t change your mind now, I’m dead, I took the dagger and dug it deep, Now bloods all that’s left on my bed [comments] => 2 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 36 [informant] => corrupted_minds [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
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