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No
Poke him with a stick,
No You
Look his fingers are swelled,
Get one of his eyballs,
Not right
Thats sick,
I agree,
I didnt do it,
Me neither,
He held his own head under there,
Its his own fault,
THE GOD DAMN FREAK!!!!
Shut up...
Its for the best,
He knew too much [comments] => 4 [counter] => 144 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Ripper_Something_Unusual [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Finding Dead Bodies In Rivers

Contributed by Ripper_Something_Unusual on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 06:55:51 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Is he breathing?
No
Poke him with a stick,
No You
Look his fingers are swelled,
Get one of his eyballs,
Not right
Thats sick,
I agree,
I didnt do it,
Me neither,
He held his own head under there,
Its his own fault,
THE GOD DAMN FREAK!!!!
Shut up...
Its for the best,
He knew too much

Copyright © Ripper_Something_Unusual ... [ 2004-07-17 18:55:51]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Finding Dead Bodies In Rivers (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 08:45:08 PM AEST
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Eerie and chilling. Not sure whether I like it or not.
Interesting structure to the poem.
Lots of love and peace be with you,

Chelsea

Re: Finding Dead Bodies In Rivers (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 10:58:57 PM AEST
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Definately different...a lil weird...but i like how u set it up...nice job

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears

Re: Finding Dead Bodies In Rivers (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 09:54:19 AM AEST
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Murder?

"Shut up...
Its for the best,
He knew too much"

Very interesting poem. I think I like it . . .

Well done on this count. Am going to read the rest of your stuff.

Re: Finding Dead Bodies In Rivers (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 10:16:50 PM AEST
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this is soo eerie...but thats y i liek it so much...this is an awesome write...excelent job!!!

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears

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