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Except for the pain I feel
Cuts all over my body
I never want them to heal

People may think I’m crazy
But I think I’m fine
I’m in control of my pain
And it shows with each red line

I watch as the blood drips
It feels so right
I become so alive
I just love the sight

I don’t care what people say
They’ll never understand me
They just don’t get it
Why won’t they see?

I may be depressed
But I’m not insane
I’m living my life
It just always seems to rain

You just live your life
And I’ll live mine
You don’t have to worry
Because I’ll be fine.
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Control

Contributed by CrimsonTears on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 06:03:45 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I have no control of my life
Except for the pain I feel
Cuts all over my body
I never want them to heal

People may think I’m crazy
But I think I’m fine
I’m in control of my pain
And it shows with each red line

I watch as the blood drips
It feels so right
I become so alive
I just love the sight

I don’t care what people say
They’ll never understand me
They just don’t get it
Why won’t they see?

I may be depressed
But I’m not insane
I’m living my life
It just always seems to rain

You just live your life
And I’ll live mine
You don’t have to worry
Because I’ll be fine.

Copyright Â© CrimsonTears ... [ 2004-07-17 18:03:45]
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Re: Control (User Rating: 1 )
by apollo on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 06:06:57 PM AEST
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very very true crimsontears i feel the same way. people need to live their OWN lives and let us live OURS. if you choose to do something, do it because you love it. do not do it because another wants you to. you have conveyed every emotion of my life in this poem and how i just wish people would allow me to live my life. this was a very miraculous piece.

brandon

Re: Control (User Rating: 1 )
by hilaryduffisme_yah on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 06:09:11 PM AEST
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Very beautiful poem! I can feel your pain! Dont worry though! I don't cut myself!

Re: Control (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 06:14:21 PM AEST
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this is a very power and emotional poem, a great first write, you have come along way in your poetry writing,

pixie xx

Re: Control (User Rating: 1 )
by Dusty on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 06:22:41 PM AEST
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Excellent! Especially for a first poem!!
~Dusty~

Re: Control (User Rating: 1 )
by hooray_its_jen on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 06:26:08 PM AEST
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That was really your first poem? Wow, I'm impressed! Very good poem, I think. Wonderful job!

Blessings
Love, Jenna

Re: Control (User Rating: 1 )
by Ripper_Something_Unusual on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 07:20:40 PM AEST
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that is the most ive ever related to a poem on here. It moved me so much, It felt like it was my thoughts too...

Re: Control (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 08:28:33 PM AEST
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excellent. much talent. =]

Re: Control (User Rating: 1 )
by DeLeriousTearZ on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 11:18:30 PM AEST
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Yessssss.....EXACTLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! grEat wRite
*Jo

Re: Control (User Rating: 1 )
by Dizza_13 on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 11:22:23 PM AEST
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Beautiful, I feel this way all the time. Great work

dizza

Re: Control (User Rating: 1 )
by matts_sweetie_04 on Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 11:04:01 PM AEST
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this is a very good poem expecially it being your first. Keep it up!

Emily

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