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[aid] => mick
[title] => Stay w/me
[time] => 2004-07-17 17:44:38
[hometext] => This poem is for everyone in my life who's either gone or on there way to dying, it makes me angry why he takes them away, what does he need them up there for? he really don't, i do!
[bodytext] => i need you here, please stay with me, put heaven on hold, cone on try and be bold, i'll try and stop your pain, for if you go, i'll feel im to blame, please wait....... stay with me! put dear old heaven on hold, Stay & please come on try and be bold, i'll teach you how too deal with your pain, as long as you put dear heaven on hold, and stay with me for so long, please i need you here, put dear old heaven on hold ok? because heaven has forever for you, and i only have so long, Look i just love you and need you here
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Stay wme
Contributed by
white_rain_angel
on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 05:44:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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i need you here, please stay with me, put heaven on hold, cone on try and be bold, i'll try and stop your pain, for if you go, i'll feel im to blame, please wait....... stay with me! put dear old heaven on hold, Stay & please come on try and be bold, i'll teach you how too deal with your pain, as long as you put dear heaven on hold, and stay with me for so long, please i need you here, put dear old heaven on hold ok? because heaven has forever for you, and i only have so long, Look i just love you and need you here
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Re: Stay wme
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by waos on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 06:00:34 PM AEST
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| thats sweet. i can see how you would feel that way. i can relate to it. |
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Re: Stay wme
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 08:36:18 PM AEST
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| well expressed. |
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Re: Stay wme
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 09:24:12 PM AEST
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I know this feeling..all too well...
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Jenni |
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Re: Stay wme
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 06:43:35 AM AEST
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"because heaven has forever for you, and i only have so long,"
awww... yes, death is a hard to deal with... but have faith that these people are in a better place now and that you WILL see them again one day, that should get you through.
Good write. |
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