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Array ( [sid] => 56529 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fears [time] => 2004-07-17 14:17:58 [hometext] => Things are just tough right now... [bodytext] => This pain in me
It burns like fire
Sacalding heat
As I grow tired
I drop to a knee
As I jerk my head
The pain in seeks
Is how it's lead
It hurts and burns
Down to my soul
Just as hot
As burning coal
It tears at me
And I fall apart
At the end o' the bed
Sits the unstable chart
I know it's coming
And nearly here
For this is all
My greatest fear [comments] => 5 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 13 [informant] => lifefliesby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Fears

Contributed by lifefliesby on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 02:17:58 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

This pain in me
It burns like fire
Sacalding heat
As I grow tired
I drop to a knee
As I jerk my head
The pain in seeks
Is how it's lead
It hurts and burns
Down to my soul
Just as hot
As burning coal
It tears at me
And I fall apart
At the end o' the bed
Sits the unstable chart
I know it's coming
And nearly here
For this is all
My greatest fear

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Re: Fears (User Rating: 1 )
by C2C on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 02:22:40 PM AEST
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This poem makes me believe the greatest fear is some sort of illness or death. Especially the "unstable chart" at the end of the bed. Remins me of a hospital bed.
It's a great poem because you have to think about it, lots of depth. I sincerely hope everything works out for you.

~Tuesday~

Re: Fears (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 02:25:22 PM AEST
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Now, I know you really well and I'm having trouble with this one's meaning.
This is a really good poem, it's full of symbols and passion.
...
but I think we need to talk.
Love always,

Chelsea

Re: Fears (User Rating: 1 )
by Tarukar on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 09:14:59 PM AEST
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Unless you are really talked about a hospital bed as someone suggested, the unstable chart line, that kind of feels like a forced rhyme to me. I'm sure your forehead could think of a substitue.

Re: Fears (User Rating: 1 )
by eatfresh22 on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 04:46:03 PM AEST
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Yes, quite full of passion and emotion. I like the short, choppy lines.
~Carrie~

Re: Fears (User Rating: 1 )
by logdogs on Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 08:46:26 PM AEST
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its good and short and understandable to everyone who has a fear.

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