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Array ( [sid] => 56527 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Don't Go. [time] => 2004-07-17 14:03:14 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I try hide my tears behind laughter,
In the darkness you can't see my pain,
I hold my voice steady, but my hands betray me,
As I reach out to touch you they tremble terribly,
I lie beside you feeling the warmth of your body,
But though you still hold me, I know I am alone,
My heart is torn apart more by each word you speak,
Don't you know my life would be empty without you?
Please don't go back, please stay here with me,
I want you to be happy, I truely do,
But I always thought your happiness included me,
I guess I thought too much,
I guess I expected more,
I'm sorry if I sound selfish, I really truely am,
But, I thought you'd be there forever,
I thought I meant more to you than THIS.
Pease don't go. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 194 [topic] => 48 [informant] => dusty [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Don't Go.

Contributed by dusty on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 02:03:14 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I try hide my tears behind laughter,
In the darkness you can't see my pain,
I hold my voice steady, but my hands betray me,
As I reach out to touch you they tremble terribly,
I lie beside you feeling the warmth of your body,
But though you still hold me, I know I am alone,
My heart is torn apart more by each word you speak,
Don't you know my life would be empty without you?
Please don't go back, please stay here with me,
I want you to be happy, I truely do,
But I always thought your happiness included me,
I guess I thought too much,
I guess I expected more,
I'm sorry if I sound selfish, I really truely am,
But, I thought you'd be there forever,
I thought I meant more to you than THIS.
Pease don't go.

Copyright © dusty ... [ 2004-07-17 14:03:14]
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Re: Don't Go. (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 02:09:01 PM AEST
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thank you for touching my heart

Re: Don't Go. (User Rating: 1 )
by C2C on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 02:26:08 PM AEST
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Just from reading your poem, you can tell the words came from the heart. Great poem. :D
~Tuesday~

Re: Don't Go. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 04:57:50 PM AEST
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Hey Dusty,
well,this is very sad,but good way to express how you feel.Don't worry,everything will sort out,because from what i read,you love her more than anything in the world huh?I understand exactly how you feel,when you feel you're losing that person and that as selfish as it sounds,you don't want them to go.well i didn't loose that person,and you aren't either.Keep your faith and don't worry,everything will be ok,keep writing and take care.
Love always,
andrea

Re: Don't Go. (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 08:02:08 PM AEST
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This poem is really amazing...i can tell this is coming straight from your heart...its moving i like it alot...great job

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears

Re: Don't Go. (User Rating: 1 )
by DeLeriousTearZ on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 11:07:11 PM AEST
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I can RElate to This poeM tREmendOusly! And I wAs NevEr Able to Write hOw I FeLt aBout iT...bUt YOu cOUld..AwesOme jOb.
*Jo

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