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to make that first kiss. kiss me lightly so i can breathe, breathing has never been so difficult. as i move in, time stops and i am yours, your lips touch mine and i close my eyes, and you close yours. my hands caress your perfect face, and my lips move down to your neck. shivering cold its almost midnight. i offer you my jacket if you are cold, my dear.

it seems like its been a year, but its only been 72 hours since i first met you. and i love the way im feeling when im with you.

we have to get going, our parents are probably worried. its 2 am, and ive been in your embrace all night long. kiss you one last time before i have to leave. call you when i get home, and make sure that you are safe. lets talk till 4 am, then fall asleep, and dream about eachother. cant wait until tomorrow when i get to see your good looks and your charm.
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Glowing Eyes

Contributed by frmpoison2static on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 01:55:53 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Tonight is different, the moon is bright. your eyes are glowing as we sit and talk. i think im ready
to make that first kiss. kiss me lightly so i can breathe, breathing has never been so difficult. as i move in, time stops and i am yours, your lips touch mine and i close my eyes, and you close yours. my hands caress your perfect face, and my lips move down to your neck. shivering cold its almost midnight. i offer you my jacket if you are cold, my dear.

it seems like its been a year, but its only been 72 hours since i first met you. and i love the way im feeling when im with you.

we have to get going, our parents are probably worried. its 2 am, and ive been in your embrace all night long. kiss you one last time before i have to leave. call you when i get home, and make sure that you are safe. lets talk till 4 am, then fall asleep, and dream about eachother. cant wait until tomorrow when i get to see your good looks and your charm.

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Re: Glowing Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by brokensoul on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 01:59:43 PM AEST
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that reminds me of how i used to write about a year ago before loved dtabbed me in the back i brout back some fond memories there is a part of me that wishes i could still be like that

Re: Glowing Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by C2C on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 02:32:20 PM AEST
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Awe...*sighs with dreamy look on her face* your poem is adorable. It's the simple things really, and you described that feathery kiss wonderfully. Great poem.

~Tuesday~

Re: Glowing Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by DeLeriousTearZ on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 11:01:25 PM AEST
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As a GiRl reading thIs.....DaMn I wiSh GuYs expREss LOve the Way YoU do! Adorable and Charming write!
*Jo

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