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What you want to know about my love story
How can I tell about my sad love story
When I start to tell then my tears roll down
She was there always for me like an angel
I could hold her in my arm
I could hug her with my heart
I could kiss her tenderly
She gave her unconditional love with passion
She was the world to me
I have walked with her every moment and
the mountains and oceans opened their heart for us
What a wonderful day when I was with her
Those days were the best days of my life
But till the Satan separated me from her
I did not know that her sickness will end her life
She can not see the tears in my eyes
neither the pain in my heart that cries for her everyday
My love story ends into an incomplete story.

Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka

Copyright @2004 Ravi Sathasivam

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My love story.............

Contributed by ravisada on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 07:48:08 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Where do I start my love story
What you want to know about my love story
How can I tell about my sad love story
When I start to tell then my tears roll down
She was there always for me like an angel
I could hold her in my arm
I could hug her with my heart
I could kiss her tenderly
She gave her unconditional love with passion
She was the world to me
I have walked with her every moment and
the mountains and oceans opened their heart for us
What a wonderful day when I was with her
Those days were the best days of my life
But till the Satan separated me from her
I did not know that her sickness will end her life
She can not see the tears in my eyes
neither the pain in my heart that cries for her everyday
My love story ends into an incomplete story.

Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka

Copyright @2004 Ravi Sathasivam

Copyright © ravisada ... [ 2004-07-17 07:48:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: My love story............. (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 10:43:31 AM AEST
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Time will heal you and you will love again. Take the time you need to heal.

Re: My love story............. (User Rating: 1 )
by shrunkin_fool34142316 on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 10:45:14 AM AEST
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it's not tha worst not tha best u coulda did betta but good job
i hope things work out the way they're supposed ta everything happens 4 a reason so just hang in there

Re: My love story............. (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 02:15:37 PM AEST
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I want you to know that love lost in death hurts like hell... you reach for them there but they are not... its is hard but you must live on for them keep them alive in your heart. and i'm sure she does see your tears...

tasha...

Re: My love story............. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 08:43:02 AM AEST
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Aww ravi.
Well...tasha said almost everything I was going to say....
I just want to add that yes, time will heal its wounds, even if only slightly, and you'll come to realise that she will always be there for you.....she hasn't really gone away.
Just--waiting for you to join her.
Besides, remember, she will always be in your heart........
Soul-searching write, this is.

~kate

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