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Array ( [sid] => 56412 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => What You Do To Me [time] => 2004-07-16 15:25:14 [hometext] => A whisper from a dream... thoughts from far downstream... into the deep shadows of the past.... am I chained by these memories that still last (how I wish it never was). [bodytext] => When I lie awake, awake at night
trying hard to sleep, that simple delight
what did I see, but your sweet sweet sight.

When I finally drift away, away to space
into sweet sleep's, gentle embrace
what did I find, but your beautiful beautiful face.

When I wake up, wake up each day
what did I think, would I thought of today
nothing but you, your lovely lovely sway.

This is what you do, you do to me
all that I am, all I will ever be
I lay to you, my angel angel thee. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 2 [informant] => baronhawk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

What You Do To Me

Contributed by baronhawk on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 03:25:14 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

When I lie awake, awake at night
trying hard to sleep, that simple delight
what did I see, but your sweet sweet sight.

When I finally drift away, away to space
into sweet sleep's, gentle embrace
what did I find, but your beautiful beautiful face.

When I wake up, wake up each day
what did I think, would I thought of today
nothing but you, your lovely lovely sway.

This is what you do, you do to me
all that I am, all I will ever be
I lay to you, my angel angel thee.

Copyright © baronhawk ... [ 2004-07-16 15:25:14]
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Re: What You Do To Me (User Rating: 1 )
by dolly_dagger on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 04:00:56 PM AEST
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wow what a beautiful poem. I love the fact that it's simplicity produces such a powerful and timeless message. Thank you for sharing
xxxx

Re: What You Do To Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 04:05:31 PM AEST
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Bravo! This has that sensitivity, devoid of sentimentality, that makes a great love poem. Excellent piece. It's great to read more of your work.

Andrew

Re: What You Do To Me (User Rating: 1 )
by DeLeriousTearZ on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 04:19:15 PM AEST
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The WorDing iS DiVine..Great work!! I bet tHe pErson yoU wrOte iT fOr feLL to TheIr KnEEz!

Re: What You Do To Me (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 01:44:27 AM AEST
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Aww..this is very sweet. venkat

Re: What You Do To Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 08:20:58 PM AEST
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Soft, exquisite, and your heart penned this one without a doubt.

You are one of my favorite poets.

I wanted it to be longer!

Kie

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